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The Coffin-lid

by W. R. S. Ralston

The Coffin-lid

The Coffin-lid THE COFFIN-LID.[408] A moujik was driving along one night with a load of pots. His horse grew tired, and all of a sudden it came to a standstill alongside of a graveyard. The moujik unharnessed his horse and set it free to graze; meanwhile he laid himself down on one of the graves. But somehow he didn't go to sleep. He remained lying there some time. Suddenly the grave began to open beneath him: he felt the movement and sprang to his feet. The grave opened, and out of it came a corpse--wrapped in a white shroud, and holding a coffin lid--came out and ran to the church, laid the coffin-lid at the door, and then set off for the village. The moujik was a daring fellow. He picked up the coffin-lid and remained standing beside his cart, waiting to see what would happen. After a short delay the dead man came back, and was going to snatch up his coffin-lid--but it was not to be seen. Then the corpse began to track it out, traced it up to the moujik, and said: "Give me my lid: if you don't, I'll tear you to bits!" "And my hatchet, how about that?" answers the moujik. "Why, it's I who'll be chopping you into small pieces!" "Do give it back to me, good man!" begs the corpse. "I'll give it when you tell me where you've been and what you've done." "Well, I've been in the village, and there I've killed a couple of youngsters." "Well then, now tell me how they can be brought back to life." The corpse reluctantly made answer: "Cut off the left skirt of my shroud, and take it with you. When you come into the house where the youngsters were killed, pour some live coals into a pot and put the piece of the shroud in with them, and then lock the door. The lads will be revived by the smoke immediately." The moujik cut off the left skirt of the shroud, and gave up the coffin-lid. The corpse went to its grave--the grave opened. But just as the dead man was descending into it, all of a sudden the cocks began to crow, and he hadn't time to get properly covered over. One end of the coffin-lid remained sticking out of the ground. The moujik saw all this and made a note of it. The day began to dawn; he harnessed his horse and drove into the village. In one of the houses he heard cries and wailing. In he went--there lay two dead lads. "Don't cry," says he, "I can bring them to life!" "Do bring them to life, kinsman," say their relatives. "We'll give you half of all we possess." The moujik did everything as the corpse had instructed him, and the lads came back to life. Their relatives were delighted, but they immediately seized the moujik and bound him with cords, saying: "No, no, trickster! We'll hand you over to the authorities. Since you knew how to bring them back to life, maybe it was you who killed them!" "What are you thinking about, true believers! Have the fear of God before your eyes!" cried the moujik. Then he told them everything that had happened to him during the night. Well, they spread the news through the village; the whole population assembled and swarmed into the graveyard. They found out the grave from which the dead man had come out, they tore it open, and they drove an aspen stake right into the heart of the corpse, so that it might no more rise up and slay. But they rewarded the moujik richly, and sent him away home with great honor. It is not only during sleep that the Vampire is to be dreaded. At cross-roads, or in the neighborhood of cemeteries, an animated corpse of this description often lurks, watching for some unwary wayfarer whom it may be able to slay and eat. Past such dangerous spots as these the belated villager will speed with timorous steps, remembering, perhaps, some such uncanny tale as that which comes next.

Moral of the Story

Even the most terrifying evils can be overcome with courage and cleverness, and those who help others will be rewarded.


Characters 3 characters

The Moujik ★ protagonist

human adult male

Implied to be strong enough to handle a horse and cart, and daring.

Attire: Simple peasant clothing, including a hatchet and a hat (implied by his dialogue).

Daring, quick-witted, resourceful, observant.

The Corpse ⚔ antagonist

magical creature ageless male

A reanimated dead body, capable of movement and speech.

Attire: Wrapped in a white shroud, with a left skirt that can be cut off.

Malevolent, murderous, reluctant to reveal secrets, easily thwarted by sunrise and cocks crowing.

The Two Lads ○ minor

human child male

Killed by the Corpse, later revived.

Attire: Unknown, likely simple village clothing.

Innocent victims.

Locations 3 locations
Graveyard

Graveyard

outdoor night unspecified

A graveyard where a moujik's horse grew tired and came to a standstill. It contains graves, one of which opens up.

Mood: eerie, mysterious, suspenseful

The moujik encounters the corpse, has a confrontation, and learns how to revive the dead.

gravesopen gravecoffin-lidmoujik's carthorse
Village Church Door

Village Church Door

transitional night unspecified

The entrance to the village church, where the corpse briefly lays its coffin-lid.

Mood: briefly ominous, fleeting

The corpse's initial destination after emerging from its grave.

church doorcoffin-lid
House in the Village

House in the Village

indoor morning unspecified

A house in the village where two youngsters were killed, filled with cries and wailing.

Mood: grief-stricken, desperate, then hopeful, then suspicious

The moujik revives the youngsters, leading to his capture and subsequent explanation.

dead youngsterspotlive coalsshroud piecelocked door

Story DNA folk tale · solemn

Moral

Even the most terrifying evils can be overcome with courage and cleverness, and those who help others will be rewarded.

Plot Summary

A brave moujik, stranded near a graveyard, witnesses a corpse emerge and kill two children in the village. He cleverly intercepts the corpse's coffin lid, forcing it to reveal how to revive its victims. After successfully bringing the children back to life, the moujik is initially accused of the murders but then explains the true events. The villagers confirm his story, destroy the vampire with an aspen stake, and reward the moujik handsomely for his courage and resourcefulness.

Themes

courage in the face of the unknownresourcefulnessjusticesupernatural evil

Emotional Arc

fear to relief to triumph

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: brisk
Descriptive: sparse

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs supernatural
Ending: moral justice
Magic: animated corpse/vampire, magical shroud piece for revival
the coffin-lid (symbol of the vampire's vulnerability)the aspen stake (symbol of definitive destruction of evil)

Cultural Context

Origin: Russian
Era: timeless fairy tale

This tale reflects common Slavic folklore beliefs about vampires (often called 'upyr' or 'vampir') and methods of dispatching them. The 'coffin-lid' element is a specific detail that adds to the creature's vulnerability.

Plot Beats (15)

  1. A moujik's horse breaks down near a graveyard at night, forcing him to rest.
  2. He witnesses a corpse emerge from a grave with its coffin lid and run to the village.
  3. The moujik, being brave, takes the coffin lid and waits for the corpse's return.
  4. The corpse returns, demands its lid, and threatens the moujik.
  5. The moujik threatens the corpse with his hatchet and demands to know where it went and what it did.
  6. The corpse confesses to killing two youngsters in the village.
  7. The moujik demands to know how to revive the victims.
  8. The corpse reluctantly reveals the method: cut a piece of its shroud, burn it with coals in the victims' house, and lock the door.
  9. The moujik cuts the shroud, returns the lid, and observes the corpse's incomplete burial as cocks crow at dawn.
  10. The moujik drives to the village, finds the house of mourning, and offers to revive the children.
  11. He performs the ritual as instructed, and the children are revived.
  12. The relatives, suspicious, seize the moujik, accusing him of the murders since he knew how to revive them.
  13. The moujik explains the entire supernatural encounter.
  14. The villagers investigate, find the vampire's grave, and stake it through the heart.
  15. The moujik is rewarded with riches and honor for his bravery and service.

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