The Dead Witch

by W. R. S. Ralston · from Russian Folk Tales

folk tale transformation dark Ages 8-14 694 words 4 min read
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The Dead Witch

THE DEAD WITCH.[26]

There was once an old woman who was a terrible witch, and

she had a daughter and a granddaughter. The time came for

the old crone to die, so she summoned her daughter and gave

her these instructions:

"Mind, daughter! when I'm dead, don't you wash my body

with lukewarm water; but fill a cauldron, make it boil its very

hottest, and then with that boiling water regularly scald me all

over."

After saying this, the witch lay ill two or three days, and

then died. The daughter ran round to all her neighbors, begging

them to come and help her to wash the old woman, and

meantime the little granddaughter was left all alone in the cottage.

And this is what she saw there. All of a sudden there

crept out from beneath the stove two demons--a big one and

a tiny one--and they ran up to the dead witch. The old demon

seized her by the feet, and tore away at her so that he stripped

off all her skin at one pull. Then he said to the little demon:

"Take the flesh for yourself, and lug it under the stove."

So the little demon flung his arms round the carcase, and

dragged it under the stove. Nothing was left of the old woman

but her skin. Into it the old demon inserted himself, and then

he lay down just where the witch had been lying.

Presently the daughter came back, bringing a dozen other

women with her, and they all set to work laying out the corpse.

"Mammy," says the child, "they've pulled granny's skin off

while you were away."

"What do you mean by telling such lies?"

"It's quite true, Mammy! There was ever such a blackie

came from under the stove, and he pulled the skin off, and got

into it himself."

"Hold your tongue, naughty child! you're talking nonsense!"

cried the old crone's daughter; then she fetched a big cauldron,

filled it with cold water, put it on the stove, and heated it till it

boiled furiously. Then the women lifted up the old crone, laid

her in a trough, took hold of the cauldron, and poured the whole

of the boiling water over her at once. The demon couldn't

stand it. He leaped out of the trough, dashed through the

doorway, and disappeared, skin and all. The women stared:

"What marvel is this?" they cried. "Here was the dead

woman, and now she isn't here. There's nobody left to lay out

or to bury. The demons have carried her off before our very

eyes!"[27]

A Russian peasant funeral is preceded or accompanied by a

considerable amount of wailing, which answers in some respect to the

Irish "keening." To the zaplachki,[28] or laments, which are uttered

on such occasions--frequently by hired wailers, who closely resemble

the Corsican "vociferators," the modern Greek "myrologists"--allusions

are sometimes made in the Skazkas. In the "Fox-wailer,"[29] for

example--one of the variants of the well-known "Jack and the

Beanstalk" story--an old man puts his wife in a bag and attempts to

carry her up the beanstalk to heaven. Becoming tired on the way, he

drops the bag, and the old woman is killed. After weeping over her

dead body he sets out in search of a Wailer. Meeting a bear, he cries,

"Wail a bit, Bear, for my old woman! I'll give you a pair of nice

white fowls." The bear growls out "Oh, dear granny of mine! how I

grieve for thee!" "No, no!" says the old man, "you can't wail." Going

a little further he tries a wolf, but the wolf succeeds no better than

the bear. At last a fox comes by, and on being appealed to, begins to

cry aloud "Turu-Turu, grandmother! grandfather has killed thee!"--a

wail which pleases the widower so much that he hands over the fowls to

the fox at once, and asks, enraptured, for "that strain again!"[30]

One of the most curious of the stories which relate to a village

burial,--one in which also the feeling with which the Russian

villagers sometimes regard their clergy finds expression--is that

called--


Story DNA folk tale · dark

Plot Summary

A dying witch instructs her daughter to scald her body with boiling water after death. When the witch dies, her daughter leaves her granddaughter alone with the corpse. Two demons emerge, skin the witch, and one demon inhabits her skin. The granddaughter's warnings are dismissed by her mother. When the women pour boiling water over the 'body' as instructed, the demon flees, leaving the women bewildered by the vanishing corpse.

Themes

deceptionsupernatural interventionthe uncanny

Emotional Arc

suspense to surprise

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: brisk
Descriptive: sparse
Techniques: direct speech to reveal character, rule of three (daughter's disbelief)

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs supernatural
Ending: ambiguous
Magic: demons, skin-wearing/possession
the witch's skin (as a vessel for deception)the stove (as a portal for the supernatural)

Cultural Context

Origin: Russian
Era: timeless fairy tale

The story is presented as a 'Skazka', a Russian folk tale. The editor's notes mention Russian funeral customs like 'zaplachki' (laments) and hired wailers, though these are not directly in the story, they provide context for the cultural setting around death.

Plot Beats (11)

  1. An old witch, on her deathbed, instructs her daughter to scald her body with boiling water after she dies.
  2. The witch dies, and the daughter leaves her young granddaughter alone with the body while she fetches neighbors.
  3. Two demons, one large and one small, emerge from under the stove.
  4. The large demon skins the dead witch in one pull and instructs the small demon to take the flesh under the stove.
  5. The large demon then enters the witch's skin and lies in her place.
  6. The daughter returns with a dozen women to prepare the body.
  7. The granddaughter tries to tell her mother about the demons and the skinning, but is scolded and disbelieved.
  8. The women prepare a cauldron of boiling water as instructed by the witch.
  9. They lift the 'body' (the demon in the skin) into a trough and pour the boiling water over it.
  10. The demon, unable to withstand the heat, leaps out of the trough and dashes out the door, still in the witch's skin.
  11. The women are left astonished, realizing the 'dead woman' has vanished, carried off by demons.

Characters 5 characters

The Dead Witch ⚔ antagonist

human elderly female

Her body is described as being stripped of its skin by demons after death.

Attire: Unknown, but likely simple, period-appropriate clothing for an old woman.

Her flayed skin, which a demon inhabits.

Cruel, manipulative (even in death, through her instructions), powerful (implied by her ability to attract demons).

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An elderly, gaunt woman with hollow cheeks and a sinister, knowing smirk. Her wild, tangled gray hair is streaked with black and adorned with dead twigs and bones. She wears tattered, layered black robes that fray at the edges, and a pointed, crumbling hat sits askew on her head. Her long, bony fingers clutch a gnarled wooden staff topped with a glowing, sickly green orb. She leans forward slightly, her posture hunched yet menacing, with piercing, sunken eyes staring directly at the viewer. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The Daughter ◆ supporting

human adult female

Unknown.

Attire: Likely simple, period-appropriate peasant dress.

Carrying a large cauldron of boiling water.

Obedient (to her mother's dying wish), dismissive (of her daughter's claims), practical.

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A young woman in her late teens with a kind, gentle expression and warm brown eyes. Her long chestnut hair is woven into a loose braid resting over one shoulder. She wears a modest dress of soft blue linen with long sleeves and a white apron, the hem slightly dusty. Her posture is poised yet humble, hands clasped gently in front of her as if ready to help. She stands with a quiet, attentive demeanor. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The Granddaughter ★ protagonist

human child female

Unknown.

Attire: Likely simple, period-appropriate child's clothing.

A small child pointing towards the stove.

Observant, truthful, brave (to report what she saw).

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A young woman in her late teens with large, curious eyes and a determined expression. She has long, chestnut brown hair neatly braided into two plaits tied with simple blue ribbons. She wears a practical, knee-length dress of faded blue cotton with a white lace collar, a clean white apron tied at the waist, and sturdy brown leather boots. She is captured mid-step, walking forward with a small woven basket held in one hand, her posture upright and hopeful. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The Old Demon ⚔ antagonist

magical creature ageless non-human

A 'blackie' that emerges from under the stove, later inhabits the witch's skin.

Attire: None, as a demon. Later, the flayed skin of the witch.

A dark, shadowy figure emerging from under a stove, then inhabiting a flayed human skin.

Malicious, cunning, powerful.

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An ancient, hunched figure with deep wrinkles and hollow, glowing orange eyes. His skin is ashen gray, stretched tight over sharp cheekbones and a pointed chin. He wears tattered, dark crimson robes that fray at the edges, with long, bony fingers ending in blackened claws. A faint, smoky aura surrounds him, and his posture is predatory, leaning forward with a cruel, knowing smirk. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.

The Little Demon ○ minor

magical creature ageless non-human

A 'tiny' blackie that emerges from under the stove.

Attire: None.

A small, dark creature dragging a human carcass.

Obedient, grotesque.

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A small, impish childlike demon with a mischievous sneer. It has small curved horns, pointed ears, and a thin, whip-like tail. Its skin is a dusky red, and it has large, glowing amber eyes. It wears only a tattered, dark leather vest. It is crouched low to the ground in a sneaking posture, one clawed hand reaching forward. Plain white background, full body visible head to toe, single figure, no watermark, no text, no signature.
Locations 1 locations
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The Witch's Cottage

indoor implied indoor setting, no specific weather mentioned

A small, humble dwelling, likely with a stove, where the witch lived and died. It becomes the scene of a supernatural event.

Mood: Initially somber due to death, then eerie and unsettling with the demons' appearance, finally chaotic and bewildered.

The witch dies here, demons appear from under the stove, strip her skin, and an old demon inhabits it. The boiling water ritual takes place here.

stove dead witch's body cauldron trough
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A humble, crooked cottage nestled in a dark, ancient forest at twilight. The small stone-and-timber dwelling has a sagging thatched roof, a single glowing window, and a sturdy wooden door slightly ajar. Wisps of ethereal, purple-blue light seep from the window and door cracks, illuminating the overgrown herb garden and twisted roots surrounding it. The air is still and heavy with a faint, magical luminescence. Inside, the silhouette of a large iron stove is visible through the window, its cold hearth now the source of the otherworldly glow. The forest behind is dense with gnarled, leafless trees, their branches like skeletal fingers against a deep indigo sky. The ground is covered in fallen leaves and strange, softly glowing mushrooms. The atmosphere is quiet, mysterious, and charged with lingering supernatural energy. no border, no frame, no watermark, no text, no signature, edge-to-edge illustration.