The Witch Girl
by W. R. S. Ralston

The Witch Girl THE WITCH GIRL.[358] Late one evening, a Cossack rode into a village, pulled up at its last cottage, and cried-- "Heigh, master! will you let me spend the night here?" "Come in, if you don't fear death!" "What sort of a reply is that?" thought the Cossack, as he put his horse up in the stable. After he had given it its food he went into the cottage. There he saw its inmates, men and women and little children, all sobbing and crying and praying to God; and when they had done praying, they began putting on clean shirts. "What are you crying about?" asked the Cossack. "Why you see," replied the master of the house, "in our village Death goes about at night. Into whatsoever cottage she looks, there, next morning, one has to put all the people who lived in it into coffins, and carry them off to the graveyard. To-night it's our turn." "Never fear, master! 'Without God's will, no pig gets its fill!'" The people of the house lay down to sleep; but the Cossack was on the look-out and never closed an eye. Exactly at midnight the window opened. At the window appeared a witch all in white. She took a sprinkler, passed her arm into the cottage, and was just on the point of sprinkling--when the Cossack suddenly gave his sabre a sweep, and cut her arm off close to the shoulder. The witch howled, squealed, yelped like a dog, and fled away. But the Cossack picked up the severed arm, hid it under his cloak, washed away the stains of blood, and lay down to sleep. Next morning the master and mistress awoke, and saw that everyone, without a single exception, was alive and well, and they were delighted beyond expression. "If you like," says the Cossack, "I'll show you Death! Call together all the Sotniks and Desyatniks[359] as quickly as possible, and let's go through the village and look for her." Straightway all the Sotniks and Desyatniks came together and went from house to house. In this one there's nothing, in that one there's nothing, until at last they come to the Ponomar's[360] cottage. "Is all your family present?" asks the Cossack. "No, my own! one of my daughters is ill. She's lying on the stove there." The Cossack looked towards the stove--one of the girl's arms had evidently been cut off. Thereupon he told the whole story of what had taken place, and he brought out and showed the arm which had been cut off. The commune rewarded the Cossack with a sum of money, and ordered that witch to be drowned. Stories of this kind are common in all lands, but the witches about whom they are told generally assume the forms of beasts of prey, especially of wolves, or of cats. A long string of similar tales will be found in Dr. Wilhelm Hertz's excellent and exhaustive monograph on werwolves.[361] Very important also is the Polish story told by Wojcicki[362] of the village which is attacked by the Plague, embodied in the form of a woman, who roams from house to house in search of victims. One night, as she goes her rounds, all doors and windows have been barred against her except one casement. This has been left open by a nobleman who is ready to sacrifice himself for the sake of others. The Pest Maiden arrives, and thrusts her arm in at his window. The nobleman cuts it off, and so rids the village of its fatal visitor. In an Indian story,[363] a hero undertakes to watch beside the couch of a haunted princess. When all is still a Rákshasa appears on the threshold, opens the door, and thrusts into the room an arm--which the hero cuts off. The fiend disappears howling, and leaves his arm behind. The horror of the next story is somewhat mitigated by a slight infusion of the grotesque--but this may arise from a mere accident, and be due to the exceptional cheerfulness of some link in the chain of its narrators.
Moral of the Story
Courage and decisive action can overcome even the most terrifying evils.
Characters
The Cossack ★ protagonist
Implied to be strong and capable, given his actions.
Attire: Traditional Cossack attire, including a sabre and a cloak.
Brave, observant, decisive, protective.
The Witch Girl ⚔ antagonist
One arm severed at the shoulder.
Attire: All in white, as she appeared at the window. Later, implied to be wearing typical village clothing.
Malicious, stealthy, vengeful (implied by her actions as 'Death').
The Master of the House ◆ supporting
Unknown.
Attire: Peasant clothing.
Fearful, hospitable, grateful.
The Ponomar ○ minor
Unknown.
Attire: Implied to be a village official or church attendant, so likely modest, respectable clothing.
Concerned for his ill daughter, unaware of her true nature.
Locations

The Last Cottage
A humble cottage, the last one in the village, where a family is crying, praying, and preparing for death. It contains a stable nearby for horses.
Mood: Fearful, somber, desperate, then relieved and joyful
The Cossack encounters the terrified family, confronts the witch, and severs her arm.

The Ponomar's Cottage
Another cottage in the village, where a daughter is found ill and lying on the stove.
Mood: Revealing, tense, then triumphant
The Cossack identifies the witch by her missing arm, confirming her identity to the villagers.
Story DNA
Moral
Courage and decisive action can overcome even the most terrifying evils.
Plot Summary
A brave Cossack arrives in a village plagued by a nightly 'Death' entity. He volunteers to stay awake in a marked house and, at midnight, confronts a witch attempting to harm the family, severing her arm. The next morning, he uses the severed arm as proof to identify the Ponomar's daughter as the witch, leading to her execution and the village's salvation.
Themes
Emotional Arc
fear to relief to triumph
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
The story reflects common folk beliefs in Eastern Europe regarding witches and their ability to cause harm, often associated with nocturnal activities and specific rituals (like sprinkling). The community's swift and brutal justice is also characteristic of historical folk justice.
Plot Beats (13)
- A Cossack rides into a village late at night and seeks shelter.
- The house owner warns him that 'Death' visits houses nightly, and it's their turn.
- The Cossack reassures the family and stays awake while they sleep.
- At midnight, a witch in white appears at the window with a sprinkler.
- The Cossack cuts off her arm with his sabre; she howls and flees.
- He hides the arm and washes away the blood, then sleeps.
- The next morning, the family is alive and well, to their delight.
- The Cossack offers to show them 'Death' and asks for village leaders to gather.
- They search house to house, finding nothing until they reach the Ponomar's cottage.
- The Ponomar states one daughter is ill, lying on the stove.
- The Cossack sees the daughter is missing an arm.
- He recounts the previous night's events and produces the severed arm.
- The community rewards the Cossack and orders the witch to be drowned.





