Das Begräbnis

by Lisa Wenger · from Amoralische Fabeln

fairy tale satire satirical Ages 8-14 785 words 4 min read
Cover: Das Begräbnis

Adapted Version

CEFR A1 Age 5 382 words 2 min Canon 100/100

It was a quiet day. The Old Mouse was gone. Many mice came to say goodbye.

The Old Mouse was dead. His family came to see him. Many mice came too. They stood near the Old Mouse. It was a very sad day for some.

Grey Mouse stood apart. White Mouse stood with her. They knew the Old Mouse well. They talked quietly. Grey Mouse said, "He was not good." White Mouse said, "She was not good." They talked more.

More mice came. They talked quietly too. They talked about the Old Mouse. They talked about his many things. "How did he get food?" one mouse asked.

Brown Mouse went to Widow Mouse. He said kind words to her. He said, "Old Mouse was good." Grey Mouse heard. She thought, "That is not true." She did not like it.

White Mouse said, "He was good." Grey Mouse said, "He was not." They had different ideas about him. White Mouse said, "His wife was not pretty." She was not happy.

Many more mice came. They all said good things. They praised the Old Mouse. But they did not know him very well. They just said nice words.

Widow Mouse stood by the Old Mouse. She thought about the food. Old Mouse had much food. Now it was all hers. She could give it away. She felt happy about this.

Brown Mouse thought too. He looked at Widow Mouse. He thought, "I can marry her." Then he can have the food. He can have all things.

Widow Mouse looked at Brown Mouse. She thought, "I want to be happy." She wanted the funeral to end. She wanted comfort from him. She hoped he would come soon.

The mice went to the grave. A leader mouse spoke. He said kind words. He said many good things.

White Mouse looked sad. She cried a little. But inside she felt happy. Widow Mouse did not have Old Mouse.

Brown Mouse looked sad. But inside he was happy. He thought of the food. He thought of Widow Mouse.

Widow Mouse shed a tear. But inside she felt happy. She was now free. She was happy to be free.

The mice went home. They all had their own thoughts about the Old Mouse. Some were sad, some were happy.

Original Story 785 words · 4 min read

Das Begräbnis

Eine sehr angesehene Maus war tot und sollte begraben werden. Um das Lager des Verstorbenen war die Familie versammelt, und wartete auf die Eingeladenen. Zwei Mäuse standen abseits, eine graue und eine weiße. Die Weiße hatte einst die tote Maus geliebt, und die graue war von dem Verstorbenen geliebt und verlassen worden.

»Er hat die Seinen genug gequält,« sagte sie; »ich habe jahrelang zugesehen, und seine Witwe wird ihm nicht manche Träne nachweinen.«

»Sie war auch darnach,« sagte giftig die Weiße; »ich habe sie in ihrer Jugend gekannt. Gefallsüchtig und faul und ... Guten Abend, lieber Freund! Es freut mich, Sie zu sehen, wenn auch der Anlaß ein trauriger ist.«

»Ein sehr trauriger, liebe Cousine. Wir alle verlieren viel an ihm. Die ganze Gesellschaft trauert mit der Familie.« Der Vetter der weißen Maus trat beiseite, und sprach mit einem Neueingetretenen.

»Sehen Sie dort die weiße Maus,« sagte der. »Sie hat in ihrer Jugend den Verstorbenen geliebt und trauert nun um ihn, als wäre sie seine Witwe.«

»Vielleicht mehr als die Witwe selbst,« meinte bedeutungsvoll der Angeredete; »ich könnte Ihnen Dinge erzählen, an denen der Tote keine Freude gehabt hätte!«

»Was Sie nicht sagen.«

»Ein ander Mal; hier könnte man uns hören.«

Eine kräftige braune Maus trat zu der Witwe. »Im Namen sämtlicher Mäuse unserer Gesellschaft spreche ich Ihnen mein tiefstes Beileid aus. Wir alle trauern mit Ihnen. Da ist keiner und keine, die nicht an Ihrem Schmerz Anteil nehme, und die nicht die Hochherzigkeit, die Freigebigkeit und die Güte des Verstorbenen priese.«

»Der und freigebig!« sagte verächtlich die graue Maus zur weißen. »Ja, wenn es alle wußten und ihn dafür lobten, da gab er; aber frag' die Maus, seine Frau, die könnte dir erzählen. Ein Geizhals war er, ein gemeiner.«

»Er wird auch nicht allein schuld sein,« sagte aufgeregt die Maus, die ihn unglücklich geliebt hatte. »Da hätte ich seine Frau sein sollen! Ich hätte anders sparen und zu seiner Sache sehen wollen! Die Äpfel ließ sie im Keller verfaulen und die Würmer fraßen den halben Weizen! Begreifst du überhaupt, daß er sie nahm? Aus einer solchen Familie? Arm! Und nicht einmal hübsch!«

»Nicht hübsch! Sie war doch sehr hübsch!«

»Der Geschmack ist verschieden,« sagte schnippisch die weiße Maus.

»Ja leider,« wisperte die Graue.

»Ich möchte eigentlich wissen, woher er die Mittel hatte, so großartig zu leben,« sagte der Vetter zu seinem Nachbarn; »er war doch nicht eigentlich reich.«

»Oho! Reich war er schon! Ganze Haufen Weizen lagen da und Kerzen und Speck. Wie er dazu kam, ist freilich eine andere Sache.«

»So, so! Aha! Ja, ich habe auch schon etwas munkeln hören.«

Mehr und immer mehr Trauernde waren gekommen. Arme Mäuse waren keine da. Aber viele Mäusevereinsvorsteher. Sie alle lobten den Verstorbenen, seinen wohlwollenden Sinn, seine Freigebigkeit. Die junge schöne Maus, die dort am Lager des Toten stand, hörte gar nicht mehr, was die vielen redeten. Alle hatten dasselbe gesagt, und allen hatten sie dasselbe geantwortet.

»Nun kann ich von unseren Vorräten nehmen, soviel ich will; es hat mir keiner mehr darein zu reden!« dachte sie. »Und geben kann ich davon, wem ich will!« Sie versank in Luftschlössern. Auch die kräftige braune Maus, die so schön an der Bahre gesprochen hatte, machte solche.

»Vielleicht wäre es ganz klug, wenn ich die Witwe heiratete. Dann ist all der Weizen mein.« Und die braune Maus drückte die Pfoten der verwitweten Maus und sah ihr mitleidig und bedeutungsvoll in die Augen.

»Verfügen Sie ganz über mich.«

»Mit dem hätte ich ein anderes Leben führen können,« dachte die Witwe und fragte sich, wann die braune Maus wohl kommen werde, um sie zu trösten.

»Vielleicht gleich nach dem Begräbnis. Ich wollte, es wäre schon vorbei.«

Die reiche Maus wurde begraben. Der Verstorbene lag nun still da und konnte alles das nicht mehr tun, was er bei Lebzeiten so gerne getan hatte: Seine Frau ärgern, seinen Freunden sagen, er könne ihnen – leider! – nicht helfen, vor seinem Weizenhaufen sitzen und sich freuen, daß er ihn gestohlen, die armen Mäuse anfahren, wenn sie bettelten, und den Reichen geben, wenn es nachher im Mäuse-Tagblatt stand. – Das alles konnte die tote Maus nicht mehr. – Der Mäuseverein-Vorsteher sprach aber sehr schön an des Verstorbenen Grab. Die weiße Maus, die ihn in ihrer Jugend geliebt hatte, weinte, aber freute sich, daß die Witwe, die sie ihr ganzes Leben lang beneidet, ihn nun auch nicht mehr habe.

Die braune kräftige Maus freute sich, daß der Verstorbene solche Haufen Weizen hinterlassen, und ihm nun durch seine Witwe Gelegenheit gebe, die Haufen zu genießen.

Die Witwe sogar trauerte dankbar. Dankbar dafür, daß er nun tot war. Und zierlich führte sie ihr Schwänzchen an die Augen – sie waren ihr wahrhaftig feucht geworden.


Story DNA

Moral

The true character of individuals often remains hidden behind social facades, especially in times of perceived sorrow.

Plot Summary

A respected but secretly cruel and greedy mouse dies, and its funeral becomes a stage for the hypocrisy of the community. While prominent mice offer effusive praise, others privately gossip about the deceased's ill-gotten wealth and poor character. The widow and a potential suitor secretly fantasize about inheriting the deceased's riches. Ultimately, everyone, including the widow, is revealed to be relieved or pleased by the death, anticipating personal gain or freedom, highlighting the stark contrast between outward mourning and inward self-interest.

Themes

hypocrisygreedsocial pretenseenvy

Emotional Arc

cynicism to ironic satisfaction

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: irony, indirect characterization through dialogue

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs society
Ending: moral justice
Magic: talking animals
the deceased mouse (symbol of hypocrisy and hidden vice)the wheat piles (symbol of ill-gotten wealth and greed)

Cultural Context

Origin: Swiss-German
Era: timeless fairy tale

Lisa Wenger was a Swiss writer and painter, known for her children's books and illustrations. This story, though featuring animals, reflects human social dynamics and hypocrisy common in many cultures.

Plot Beats (15)

  1. A respected mouse has died, and its family and invited guests gather for the funeral.
  2. Two mice, a grey one (loved and abandoned by the deceased) and a white one (who once loved the deceased), stand apart, criticizing the deceased and the widow.
  3. Other arriving guests engage in gossip, questioning the deceased's wealth and hinting at secrets.
  4. A powerful brown mouse offers condolences to the widow, praising the deceased's generosity, which is immediately scoffed at by the grey mouse.
  5. The white mouse, still bitter, defends the deceased's character against the grey mouse's accusations, while also criticizing the widow's past.
  6. The deceased's cousin and another mouse discuss the deceased's questionable wealth and lifestyle.
  7. More mourners arrive, mostly prominent mice, who all praise the deceased's virtues, despite underlying doubts.
  8. The young, beautiful widow daydreams about having control over the deceased's vast provisions and giving them away as she pleases.
  9. The powerful brown mouse also fantasizes about marrying the widow to gain access to the deceased's wealth, and makes a suggestive gesture to the widow.
  10. The widow, in turn, thinks about a better life with the brown mouse and wishes the funeral would end so she could be comforted.
  11. The rich mouse is buried, and the narrator explicitly states all the malicious or selfish acts the deceased can no longer perform.
  12. At the grave, the mouse society leader gives a beautiful speech.
  13. The white mouse cries, but is secretly glad the widow, whom she envied, no longer has the deceased.
  14. The brown mouse rejoices over the deceased's wealth and the opportunity to enjoy it through the widow.
  15. The widow sheds a tear, but is gratefully relieved that the deceased is finally dead.

Characters

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The Deceased Mouse

mouse adult male

A mouse, now deceased and laid out for burial. Implied to have been well-fed and robust in life, given his wealth.

Attire: None, as he is deceased.

Wants: To accumulate wealth (specifically wheat, candles, and bacon) through any means, to maintain a facade of generosity for public praise, and to exert control over those around him.

Flaw: His greed and desire for public adulation, which led him to steal and neglect his family.

He is dead at the story's beginning, so he has no arc. His death serves as a catalyst for revealing the true nature of the other characters.

A deceased mouse, lying still on a bier, surrounded by mourners.

Cruel, miserly, hypocritical, cunning, self-serving, boastful. He enjoyed tormenting his wife, refusing help to the poor, and showing off his stolen wealth to the rich.

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The Grey Mouse

mouse adult female

A grey mouse, standing slightly apart from the main gathering. Her posture might suggest a degree of bitterness or detachment.

Attire: Simple, unadorned mouse fur.

Wants: To express her true feelings about the deceased, perhaps seeking validation for her past suffering.

Flaw: Her bitterness and inability to let go of past hurts.

She remains consistently critical and cynical throughout the story, her perspective unchanged by the funeral's solemnity.

A grey mouse, standing slightly apart, with a knowing, scornful expression.

Cynical, bitter, observant, truthful (in her private comments), resentful. She sees through the deceased's facade and is not afraid to voice her contempt privately.

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The White Mouse

mouse adult female

A white mouse, standing apart with the Grey Mouse. Her appearance might suggest a past beauty, now perhaps tinged with age or bitterness.

Attire: Simple, unadorned white mouse fur.

Wants: To maintain social appearances while indulging in gossip and expressing her long-held resentments, particularly towards the Widow Mouse.

Flaw: Her envy and inability to hide her true, often malicious, feelings.

She remains consistently gossipy and envious, her character unchanged by the events.

A white mouse, with a seemingly sorrowful expression that quickly turns to a sharp, gossipy look.

Gossipy, envious, judgmental, hypocritical (feigning sorrow), sharp-tongued. She pretends to mourn while secretly reveling in the misfortune of others.

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The Cousin

mouse adult male

A mouse, related to the White Mouse. Likely well-groomed, reflecting his social standing.

Attire: Unspecified, but likely well-maintained fur.

Wants: To maintain social connections and gather information/gossip about the deceased's wealth and past.

Flaw: His eagerness to engage in gossip and speculation.

He remains a minor character, primarily serving to introduce and spread gossip.

A mouse with an air of polite curiosity, leaning in to whisper.

Socially adept, curious, gossipy, concerned with appearances. He engages in polite conversation while also seeking out rumors.

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The Newcomer

mouse adult male

A mouse, newly arrived at the funeral. Likely well-groomed.

Attire: Unspecified, but well-maintained fur.

Wants: To subtly hint at scandalous information about the deceased, enjoying the power of his knowledge.

Flaw: His desire to appear knowledgeable and important.

He remains a minor character, serving to deepen the mystery around the deceased's wealth.

A mouse with a knowing, slightly smug expression, hinting at secrets.

Knowledgeable (or claims to be), secretive, enjoys hinting at scandal. He holds information he believes is damaging.

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The Brown Mouse

mouse adult male

A strong, robust brown mouse. His physique suggests health and perhaps a dominant nature.

Attire: Unspecified, but his 'kräftige' description implies a healthy, well-fed appearance.

Wants: To marry the Widow Mouse and gain control of the deceased's substantial wealth (wheat, candles, bacon).

Flaw: His transparent opportunism and greed.

He quickly shifts from a public mourner to an opportunistic suitor, revealing his true, self-serving nature.

A robust brown mouse, with a solemn public face, but a calculating glint in his eye.

Opportunistic, calculating, outwardly sympathetic, ambitious, hypocritical. He uses the funeral as an opportunity for personal gain.

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The Widow Mouse

mouse young adult female

A young, beautiful mouse, standing by the bier. Despite her beauty, she was considered 'poor' by the White Mouse's standards, suggesting she may not have been as well-fed or adorned as others before her marriage.

Attire: Unspecified, but likely simple and appropriate for mourning, perhaps a dark-colored fur or a simple, unadorned appearance.

Wants: To gain freedom from her oppressive husband, to control her own resources, and to potentially find a new, more advantageous marriage.

Flaw: Her vanity and her quickness to embrace opportunism, despite her past suffering.

She transforms from a suffering wife into a liberated, calculating widow who is grateful for her husband's death and actively seeks to secure her future and enjoy her newfound wealth.

A young, beautiful mouse, delicately wiping a feigned tear from her eye with her tail, while a subtle smirk plays on her lips.

Initially submissive and long-suffering, but quickly reveals an opportunistic, self-serving, and somewhat vain nature. She is relieved by her husband's death and looks forward to her freedom and wealth.

Locations

The Deceased's Lair/Home

indoor Implied indoor comfort, no specific season or weather mentioned.

A cozy, perhaps slightly cluttered, burrow or chamber within a larger mouse dwelling, where the deceased mouse's body is laid out. The air is thick with the hushed whispers and subtle movements of many mice, creating a somber yet gossipy atmosphere. The space is likely dimly lit, perhaps by a single flickering candle, casting long shadows.

Mood: Somber, gossipy, tense, hypocritical, subtly expectant.

The initial gathering for the funeral, where various mice express their condolences, true feelings, and hidden agendas. The central location for the social drama.

The deceased mouse's body (lying still) Gathered mice (various colors and sizes) Flickering candle (implied for light/solemnity) Small, humble furnishings typical of a mouse burrow

The Grave Site

outdoor Implied mild weather suitable for an outdoor gathering, no harsh conditions.

A small, freshly dug grave, likely under a patch of earth or beneath a sheltering plant, signifying the final resting place of the deceased mouse. The ground is soft, recently disturbed, and surrounded by natural elements. The light is likely subdued, fitting the solemnity of the occasion.

Mood: Solemn, final, yet still tinged with the underlying relief and self-interest of the mourners.

The actual burial of the rich mouse, where the Mouse Association leader gives a eulogy, and the various mice reflect on their true feelings about the deceased and their own future prospects.

Freshly dug mound of earth (the grave) Small, simple marker (implied, or just the disturbed earth) Surrounding natural vegetation (grasses, roots, small plants) Mice gathered around the grave

The Cellar (Implied)

indoor Cool and damp, typical of a cellar environment.

A cool, dark, and damp storage space, likely beneath a human dwelling or a larger animal's burrow, where food provisions like apples and wheat are kept. The air is heavy with the scent of earth, stored goods, and perhaps a hint of decay. It's a place of hidden abundance and neglect.

Mood: Hidden, cool, neglected, a place of potential waste or abundance.

Mentioned in the dialogue as the place where the deceased's wife allowed provisions to spoil, highlighting her perceived incompetence and the deceased's hidden wealth.

Piles of wheat (some possibly worm-eaten) Rotting apples Candles and bacon (mentioned as stored goods) Damp earthen walls or stone foundations Shadows and dimness