So Oder So

by Lisa Wenger · from Amoralische Fabeln

fable moral tale satirical Ages 8-14 728 words 4 min read
Cover: So Oder So

Adapted Version

CEFR A1 Age 5 326 words 2 min Canon 100/100

Mother Duck had a little White Duckling. Mother Duck spoke to her daughter. "You must obey," she said. "A good duck obeys. A Drake will marry you. She moved her tail."

White Duckling had a yellow beak. She did not want to obey. "I want my own way," she said. "I want to be free. I want to choose."

Mother Duck was shocked. "What do you say?" she cried. "This is not right. Do not think this way. She felt sad."

A Rouen Mother Duck came by. Her Rouen Duckling was with her. "My duckling obeys," she said. Rouen Duckling said, "I obey. This is my duty."

A big Drake walked near. He was white and handsome. He looked at White Duckling. "Will you be my wife?" he asked. White Duckling asked, "Can I be free?"

Drake said, "Yes, you can." Duckling was happy. "Then I will come with you," she said.

The Drake asked Rouen Duckling. "Come with me?" Rouen Duckling bowed. "Yes," she said. "I will obey you."

Both ducklings went with the Drake. They lived on his farm. White Duckling did what she wanted. Rouen Duckling did what she thought was right.

They both ate food. White Duckling ate because she wanted to eat. Rouen Duckling ate because it was good. They both swam in the pond. They both laid eggs.

Both ducks had little babies. They were cute. White Duckling raised her babies her way. Drake did not tell her what to do. Rouen Duckling raised her babies her way. Drake did not tell her what to do. Both were good mothers.

The ducks grew old. They laid fewer eggs. The Cook came to the pond. She took White Duckling away. She took Rouen Duckling away.

The Drake was sad. He missed his ducks. "They were both good ducks," he said. After some time, he found two new ducks. Both ducks lived their lives. They were different. Life changed for them both.

Original Story 728 words · 4 min read

So oder so!

»Und ich sage dir, Gelbes: Wenn du überhaupt willst, daß ein Enterich dich heiratet, so lerne das Gehorchen,« rief eine dicke weiße Peking-Ente und wippte aufgeregt mit dem Schwänzlein.

»Warum, Frau Mutter?«

»Weil dich sonst keiner nimmt!«

»Es braucht mich keiner zu nehmen, dem ich gehorchen muß,« sagte das Gelbe. Es war eigentlich schon weiß geworden und hatte nur einen gelben Schnabel.

»Was für einen willst du denn?« fragte entsetzt die Alte.

»Einem der mich tun läßt, was ich will,« sagte sehr bestimmt das junge weiße Entlein mit dem gelben Schnabel.

»Und was willst du?« forschte die Ente angstvoll.

»Gleiche Rechte wie der Enterich.«

»Was sind das für Rechte, du schreckliches Geschöpf?« schrie die Entenmutter, die noch nie solche Ansichten gehört hatte.

»Ich will baden, wo ich will, ich will fressen, was ich will, ich will auf die Wiese gehen, wann ich will, und ich will meine Jungen aufziehen, wie ich will: da hat mir keiner etwas dreinzureden, denn es sind meine Jungen!« Das Gelbschnäbelchen mußte Atem schöpfen. Die Alte steckte einen Augenblick den Kopf unter den Flügel, sie mußte sich sammeln.

Da mischte sich eine bunte Rouen-Ente ins Gespräch.

»Entchen,« sagte sie zu dem weißen Entlein, »sieh' dich vor! Es könnte schief gehen mit solchen Grundsätzen. Da, sieh' mein eigenes Junges. Dem habe ich meine Ansichten beigebracht und bin glücklich und gut durchs Leben gekommen. Kleines Buntes, wer wird dein Herr sein?«

»Der Enterich,« sagte die kleine Rouen-Ente.

»Was ist deine Pflicht?«

»Gehorsam ist meine Pflicht!«

»Was wird dein Glück sein?«

»Meine Jungen aufzuziehen, wird mein Glück sein!«

»Und dein Stolz!« mahnte die Alte.

»Und mein Stolz,« fügte die Junge hastig hinzu.

»Lächerlich!« schüttelte sich der Gelbschnabel.

Da kam ein Enterich gewatschelt. Groß, schneeweiß, krausen Flaum im Nacken und die Schwanzfedern gelockt, wie es sich für einen Enterich aus guter Familie schickt. Er verbeugte sich vor dem weißen Entlein.

»Es ist Zeit, daß ich mir eine Familie gründe,« sagte er. »Können Sie sich entschließen, meine Gefährtin zu werden?« Die Art seiner Rede gefiel dem Entlein.

»Werde ich volle Freiheit haben, zu tun, was ich will?« fragte das kecke Ding.

»Das werden Sie!« versprach der Enterich.

»So will ich mit Ihnen ziehen,« entschied das Entlein, und sah mit seinen beerenschwarzen kugelrunden Augen zu seiner Mutter hinüber.

»Frau Mutter, nun werden Sie etwas erleben,« rief es. Aber die alte Peking-Ente antwortete nicht. Sie schlürfte eben eine dicke Raupe in sich hinein.

Der Enterich trat nun auch vor das junge Rouen-Entchen.

»Wollen auch Sie mit mir kommen?« fragte er etwas von oben herab.

»Es ist mir eine große Ehre,« sagte bescheiden das Bunte und verneigte sich, »und ich werde Ihnen eine gehorsame Gefährtin sein.«

»Freut mich,« sagte der Enterich. Die beiden jungen Enten nahmen nun Abschied von ihren Müttern und zogen mit dem Enterich auf seinen Hof.

Dort lebten sie vergnügt zusammen. Das weiße Entlein nach neuen Grundsätzen, und das Bunte nach alten. Da der Enterich ein guter Kerl war, kam es mit den Grundsätzen ganz aufs selbe heraus.

Sie fraßen alle drei aus einer Schüssel: die Weiße, weil sie fressen wollte, und die Bunte, weil sie fressen durfte.

Sie zogen beide hinter dem Enterich her auf die grüne Wiese, die Weiße, weil es ihr so paßte, und die Bunte, weil sie nichts Besseres zu tun wußte.

Sie legten jeden Morgen ihr Ei, die Gelbschnäbelige, weil sie wußte, daß es ihr von der Natur so bestimmt war, und die andere, weil das Ei ja von selber kam.

Und beide bekamen Junge, niedliche gelbe Dinger. Und beide führten sie gut und gewissenhaft: Die Weiße, weil sie die herzigen Geschöpfe liebte, ob sie wollte oder nicht, und die Bunte, weil sie sie auch liebte und es noch dazu ihre Pflicht und ihr Stolz war.

Die mit den neuen Grundsätzen führte und erzog ihre Jungen, wie sie es für gut fand, denn der Enterich redete ihr nie darein, er hatte anderes zu tun. Und die mit den alten Grundsätzen führte sie auch allein, denn auch um ihre Kleinen kümmerte sich der Enterich nicht.

Und als die beiden Enten älter geworden und die Eier nur mehr spärlich kamen, da stieg die Köchin hinunter zum Ententeich, packte die Weiße und die Bunte, drehte ihnen den Kragen um und kochte sie an einer braunen Tunke.

»Es waren gute Enten, alle beide!« sagte betrübt der Enterich und nahm sich schweren Herzens zwei andere.


Story DNA

Moral

Whether one lives by strict adherence to traditional roles or by asserting personal freedom, the practical outcomes and ultimate fate can be surprisingly similar.

Plot Summary

A young white duckling, defying her mother's traditional advice, insists on equal rights and freedom from obedience to a drake. In contrast, a Rouen duckling embraces the traditional role of an obedient companion. Both ducklings marry the same drake, and despite their vastly different philosophies, they lead functionally identical lives on his farm, performing the same duties for different stated reasons. Ultimately, as they age, both the independent and the obedient ducklings are taken by the cook and prepared for dinner, leaving the drake to mourn them equally and find new companions, highlighting the ironic similarity of their fates.

Themes

autonomy vs. obedienceindividual freedomgender rolesthe nature of happiness

Emotional Arc

contention to contentment to tragic irony

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: sparse
Techniques: direct comparison, repetition with variation, irony

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs society
Ending: tragic irony
Magic: talking animals
the yellow bill (symbolizing youth and defiance)the white duckling (representing modern, autonomous views)the Rouen duckling (representing traditional, obedient views)

Cultural Context

Origin: Swiss
Era: timeless fairy tale

The story subtly critiques societal expectations for women in early 20th-century Europe, where the author, Lisa Wenger, was active. It reflects debates around women's suffrage and changing roles.

Plot Beats (12)

  1. A mother Peking duck insists her yellow-billed daughter must learn obedience to marry a drake.
  2. The yellow-billed duckling, now white, asserts her desire for equal rights and freedom to do as she pleases.
  3. The mother duck is horrified by her daughter's radical views.
  4. A Rouen duck mother and her daughter demonstrate the traditional path of obedience and duty to the drake.
  5. A handsome drake arrives and proposes marriage to the white duckling, who asks if she will have full freedom.
  6. The drake agrees to her terms, and she accepts.
  7. The drake then proposes to the Rouen duckling, who humbly accepts, promising obedience.
  8. Both ducklings move to the drake's farm, living by their respective new and old principles.
  9. The story illustrates how both ducks, despite their differing philosophies, perform the same actions (eating, walking, laying eggs, raising young) for different stated reasons.
  10. The white duckling raises her young as she sees fit, as the drake doesn't interfere; the Rouen duckling also raises hers alone, as the drake also doesn't interfere.
  11. As both ducks age and lay fewer eggs, the cook takes both the white and the Rouen ducklings and prepares them for dinner.
  12. The drake mourns their loss, stating they were both good ducks, and takes two new ones.

Characters

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The White Duckling (Gelbes/Gelbschnäbelchen)

duck young adult female

A young duck, initially yellow as a duckling but quickly turning pure white, with a distinctive bright yellow beak. Her body is sleek and graceful, typical of a young Peking duck, with soft, clean feathers.

Attire: Natural white feathers, a yellow beak.

Wants: To live a life of freedom and equality, making her own choices, and raising her young as she sees fit.

Flaw: Her strong independence might be seen as stubbornness or defiance by others, potentially leading to conflict in a more traditional society.

She maintains her independent principles throughout her life, proving that her way of living can be just as fulfilling as traditional methods, ultimately leading to the same outcome in terms of happiness and raising her young.

Her pure white feathers contrasting with her bright yellow beak and striking berry-black eyes.

Independent, strong-willed, assertive, modern-thinking, loving.

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The Thick White Peking Duck (Frau Mutter)

duck adult female

A large, thick-bodied white Peking duck, indicative of her breed. She is well-fed and robust, with a waddling gait.

Attire: Natural thick white feathers.

Wants: To ensure her daughter conforms to societal norms and finds a suitable mate, believing this is the only path to happiness and security.

Flaw: Her rigid adherence to tradition and inability to understand or accept new ideas makes her resistant to change and causes her distress.

She remains unchanged, continuing to hold her traditional views, and is ultimately left behind as her daughter embarks on a new path.

Her thick, white Peking duck body, often seen waddling agitatedly or with her head tucked under her wing.

Traditional, anxious, easily shocked, opinionated, somewhat self-absorbed (e.g., eating a caterpillar during a serious conversation).

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The Rouen Duck (Bunte Rouen-Ente)

duck adult female

A colorful Rouen duck, known for its distinctive plumage. She is likely robust and well-groomed, reflecting her traditional values.

Attire: Natural colorful Rouen duck plumage, featuring a dark green head, a white neck ring, a rich claret breast, and grey body feathers.

Wants: To impart her traditional values to her daughter, believing it's the path to a happy and dutiful life.

Flaw: Her inability to consider alternative viewpoints, leading her to believe her way is the only correct way.

She remains unchanged, serving as a foil to the White Duckling's mother, reinforcing the traditional viewpoint.

Her distinctive colorful Rouen duck plumage, especially her dark green head and claret breast.

Traditional, didactic, proud of her upbringing, well-meaning but conservative.

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The Rouen Duckling (Kleines Buntes)

duck young adult female

A young, colorful Rouen duck, with the characteristic plumage of her breed, though perhaps not as fully developed as an adult. She is likely smaller and more delicate than her mother.

Attire: Natural colorful Rouen duck plumage, featuring a dark green head, a white neck ring, a rich claret breast, and grey body feathers.

Wants: To fulfill her duty as a wife and mother according to the traditional principles taught by her mother, finding happiness in obedience and raising her young.

Flaw: Her complete adherence to tradition and lack of independent thought might make her vulnerable or easily led.

She lives her life according to old principles, finding happiness and fulfilling her duties, ultimately achieving the same positive outcome as the White Duckling, demonstrating that different paths can lead to similar contentment.

Her colorful Rouen duck plumage, often seen in a modest, slightly bowed posture.

Obedient, modest, dutiful, traditional, loving.

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The Drake (Enterich)

duck adult male

A large, handsome, snow-white drake. He has curly down feathers on his neck and elegantly curled tail feathers, signifying his good family background.

Attire: Natural snow-white plumage, with curly down feathers on his neck and curled tail feathers.

Wants: To establish a family, as is customary for a drake of good standing.

Flaw: His somewhat hands-off approach to family matters, particularly raising the young, suggests a lack of direct involvement.

He remains consistent in his good-natured and accommodating character, serving as a stable figure around whom both ducklings can thrive.

His snow-white plumage, especially the curly down on his neck and his elegantly curled tail feathers.

Gentlemanly, good-natured, accommodating, somewhat detached (especially regarding child-rearing).

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The Cook (Köchin)

human adult female

An adult human woman, likely of a sturdy build, as she is capable of catching and preparing ducks. Her appearance is practical for her profession.

Attire: Practical, simple working clothes, possibly a plain dress or apron, typical of a rural cook in a German-speaking region. Fabrics would be sturdy cotton or linen in muted colors.

Wants: To prepare a meal, fulfilling her role as a cook.

Flaw: N/A (minor character, no significant flaws shown).

N/A (minor character, no arc).

Her descending to the duck pond, apron-clad, to select ducks for cooking.

Practical, unsentimental (in her professional capacity), efficient.

Locations

The Farmyard Pond

outdoor morning mild, sunny day

A bustling farmyard pond, likely with muddy edges and reeds, where ducks gather and converse. The water would be calm, reflecting the sky.

Mood: lively, gossipy, domestic

The initial debate between the mother ducks and the young ducklings about obedience and freedom, and where the Enterich proposes.

calm pond water muddy banks reeds and rushes various ducks (Peking, Rouen) sunlight on water

The Enterich's Farmyard

outdoor mild, pleasant weather

A typical Swiss or German farmyard, featuring a green meadow for grazing, a feeding trough or dish, and likely a nearby pond or stream. The architecture would be traditional, possibly a half-timbered farmhouse in the background.

Mood: peaceful, domestic, productive

The two ducklings and the Enterich live out their lives here, raising their young and demonstrating their different philosophies.

lush green meadow feeding dish/trough farmhouse (half-timbered, thatched roof) scattered farm animals sun-drenched grass

The Farmhouse Kitchen

indoor afternoon cool, crisp day outside

A rustic, warm kitchen in a traditional farmhouse, likely with a large hearth, wooden table, and cooking utensils. The air would be filled with the scent of cooking.

Mood: somber, final, domestic

The final, tragic end for the two ducks, where they are prepared for a meal.

large stone hearth wooden cooking table iron pots and pans warm firelight kitchen utensils