Einsicht
by Lisa Wenger · from Amoralische Fabeln
Adapted Version
Once upon a time, on a big farm. Two White Doves sat on a roof. They were very white birds. Sun shone on them. They loved each other. They kissed with their beaks. They were happy.
A Female Turkey watched them. She looked up. She held her head crooked. She thought, "This is not strong love." She did not like their soft sounds.
The Male Turkey walked past. He puffed up his chest. He made a loud sound. He looked very big. The Female Turkey lay down low. She loved him very much.
The Female Turkey spoke to him. "He is a small bird," she said. "He has no color. He is not important. He cannot make people respect him."
The Male Turkey felt very good. He liked her words. He shook his head. "He does not know," he said. "He believes her soft sounds."
The Female Turkey said more nice words. She lay very flat on the ground. The Male Turkey walked away. He felt very important. His dark gold feathers shone. He was proud of the farm.
A big white Rooster heard them. He heard the turkeys talk. He was very quiet. He turned his long neck.
His hens came to him. They walked very close. "Your crow is loud!" one hen said. "Your eyes are strong!" another hen said. "Your feathers are so white! They are beautiful."
The Rooster liked their words. He walked with pride. He flapped his big wings. He crowed very loud. Other roosters crowed back. They answered his strong call.
A Drake lay by the fence. He lay in the sun. He watched all of them. He had berry-black eyes. He was quiet. He moved his small tail.
His two ducks talked. They looked at the Rooster. "He is silly," one duck said. "He believes their words. They are not true words."
The ducks cleaned the Drake's feathers. They cleaned him gently. They showed him love. They were very kind to him.
The Drake let them clean him. He felt very good. He thought, "Why not? This is nice. I like this."
True love is quiet. It is not loud words. It is real. It makes you feel good.
Original Story
Einsicht
Eine schneeweiße Pfauentaube saß mit dem Tauber auf dem Dach. Sie glänzten in der Sonne und schnäbelten sich zärtlich.
»Das ist stark,« sagte das Truthuhn, das seinen Kopf ganz schief halten mußte und dazu blinzeln um hinaufzusehen. Es wollte weiter reden; aber da ging der Truthahn vorbei, kollerte und blähte sich, und das Truthuhn warf sich platt auf die Erde, verliebt und demütig. Es sah mit seinen blöden Augen zu dem stattlichen Tier empor, das mit Rasseln und Trommeln dafür dankte und sich aufblies wie ein Luftballon.
»Daß man einen Tauber anbeten kann!« kreischte das Truthuhn.
»Einen kleinen, unbedeutenden, farblosen Vogel, der keinem Geschöpf Respekt einzuflößen imstande ist.« Es lag nun flach da, wie ein breiter, bräunlicher Eierkuchen. Dem Truthahn schwoll der rote Zierat an Kopf und Hals. Er wurde purpurrot.
»Daß er die Zärtlichkeit der Taube überhaupt für voll nimmt,« kollerte er. »Daß er so wenig Einsicht hat und glaubt, was die Kleine da oben girrt.« Er schüttelte sich. Das Truthuhn vor ihm wurde noch flacher.
»Er ist ein Tauber,« sagte es verächtlich. »Kein Herrscher, kein König unter seinesgleichen, kein ...« Es konnte nicht weiter, und schnappte nach Luft. Sein bläuliches Köpflein bewegte sich vorwärts und rückwärts. Es schloß die Augen und wartete, ob der Truthahn seine Ergebenheit belohnen werde. Aber er rauschte weiter. Wie dunkles Gold glänzte sein Gefieder. Er wußte, daß er der Stolz des Hühnerhofes war.
Der große, weiße Hahn hatte dem Zwiegespräch zugehört. Er schwieg. Stolz drehte er den gebogenen Hals, und gravitätisch ging er seinen Hühnern voran durch den großen Hof. Eine der Hennen sagte, daß sie sich wundere, daß der Truthahn sich mit der dummen Dinde abgeben möge, die Verehrung und Zärtlichkeit heuchle. »Und er glaubt das alles,« sagte ein braungesprenkeltes Huhn, und trippelte zum Hahn. Der hob sich, schüttelte sich und krähte. Alle Hühner sahen sich an.
»So wie du, kräht keiner,« sagte eines.
»Wer hat dein stolzes Auge?« fragte ein anderes, und gab der Nachbarin einen Hieb, denn sie hatte ihm eine Mücke vor dem Schnabel weggeschnappt.
»Wessen Schwanzfedern wölben sich wie die deinen?«
»Wer ist so weiß wie du?«
»Wer könnte uns beschützen, wie du es tust?« Der Hahn schwieg. Er war klug. Aber er stolzierte durch den Hof, schlug mit den Flügeln und krähte, daß alle Hähne der Nachbarschaft antworteten.
Der Enterich, der am Zaun in der Sonne lag, hatte mit seinen beerenschwarzen Augen dem allem zugesehen. Er war aber zu faul, um zu sagen, was er dachte. Er wippte nur mit dem Schwänzlein und schnatterte ganz leise. Seine beiden Enten konnten sich nicht genug wundern, daß der Hahn solche grobe Schmeicheleien glaube. Sie sahen hinüber zum Hahn und schnatterten empört und verächtlich. Dann begannen sie gleichzeitig den Enterich zärtlich zu lausen. Er ließ es sich gefallen.
Warum auch nicht?
Story DNA
Moral
True affection is quiet and genuine, while vanity thrives on superficial flattery and can blind one to genuine insight.
Plot Summary
A pair of doves shares tender affection on a rooftop, observed by a vain turkey who dismisses their love as insignificant. The male turkey, full of self-importance, revels in the exaggerated flattery of his mate, who criticizes the doves' 'lack of insight'. A proud rooster similarly succumbs to the lavish praise of his hens, crowing loudly in response. Finally, a lazy drake observes all this from the fence, while his own ducks quietly show him genuine affection, prompting him to silently accept their love, implicitly highlighting the contrast with the other birds' superficiality.
Themes
Emotional Arc
observation to subtle critique
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
Lisa Wenger was a Swiss writer and painter, known for her children's books and illustrations. Her fables often carry subtle moral lessons.
Plot Beats (13)
- A white peacock-dove and a male dove sit on a roof, showing tender affection.
- A female turkey observes them, dismissing their love as insignificant.
- The male turkey passes by, puffing himself up, and the female turkey prostrates herself in adoration.
- The female turkey criticizes the doves' affection, calling the male dove 'insignificant' and 'colorless'.
- The male turkey, flattered, dismisses the doves' tenderness as a lack of 'insight'.
- The female turkey continues to flatter the male turkey, who then struts away, proud of being the 'pride of the farmyard'.
- A large white rooster overhears the turkeys' conversation.
- The rooster's hens then surround him, showering him with exaggerated compliments about his crow, eyes, tail feathers, and protective abilities.
- The rooster, despite being 'clever', accepts the flattery, struts, flaps his wings, and crows loudly, prompting other roosters to answer.
- A drake, lying by the fence, observes all these interactions with his black eyes.
- The drake's two ducks express their disbelief that the rooster believes such 'crude flattery'.
- The ducks then simultaneously begin to tenderly preen the drake.
- The drake allows their affection, silently wondering, 'Why not?'
Characters
The Peahen
A snow-white peahen, sleek and elegant, with iridescent feathers that shimmer in the sun. She is smaller and more delicate than the turkey hen, with a graceful neck and slender build.
Attire: Her natural, pristine white plumage, which is her most striking feature.
Wants: To share tender moments with her mate, to live peacefully.
Flaw: Not explicitly stated, but perhaps her quiet nature makes her overlooked by the louder, more boastful birds.
Remains consistent, a symbol of genuine affection contrasted with the other birds' vanity.
Affectionate, gentle, serene, loving.
The Peacocker
A snow-white peacocker, sleek and elegant, with iridescent feathers that shimmer in the sun. He is smaller and more delicate than the turkey, with a graceful neck and slender build.
Attire: His natural, pristine white plumage, which is his most striking feature.
Wants: To share tender moments with his mate, to live peacefully.
Flaw: Not explicitly stated, but his quiet nature makes him a target for the Turkey's scorn.
Remains consistent, a symbol of genuine affection contrasted with the other birds' vanity.
Affectionate, gentle, serene, loving.
The Turkey Hen
A large, broad, brownish turkey hen. She is described as lying 'flat like a broad, brownish pancake' when submissive. Her head is bluish and moves back and forth.
Attire: Her natural brownish plumage.
Wants: To gain the attention and approval of the Turkey, whom she adores.
Flaw: Her overwhelming need for validation and her inability to see beyond superficial displays of power.
Remains consistent, her adoration for the Turkey is unwavering.
Obsessed, fawning, submissive, easily impressed by outward show, somewhat foolish ('blöden Augen').
The Turkey
A stately, large turkey with dark gold gleaming plumage. His red wattles and snood on his head and neck swell and turn purple when he is agitated or showing off. He inflates himself like a balloon.
Attire: His natural dark gold gleaming plumage.
Wants: To maintain his status as the 'pride of the chicken yard', to receive admiration.
Flaw: His excessive pride and vanity make him oblivious to genuine affection and easily manipulated by flattery.
Remains consistent, his vanity is unchallenged.
Vain, boastful, self-important, dismissive of others, proud.
The Rooster
A large, white rooster. He has a proudly curved neck and tail feathers that arch beautifully. He is described as 'white as you'.
Attire: His magnificent, pure white plumage, with tail feathers that arch gracefully.
Wants: To maintain his position as the leader of his hens, to be admired for his strength and beauty.
Flaw: His pride, though he is more discerning than the Turkey.
Remains consistent, a figure of quiet wisdom and pride.
Proud, intelligent, wise (klug), silent observer, enjoys flattery but is not entirely fooled by it.
The Drake
A drake, lying by the fence in the sun. He has 'berry-black eyes'. His tail wags slightly.
Attire: His natural plumage, not explicitly detailed beyond his general appearance as a drake.
Wants: To relax and be comfortable, to be pampered by his mates.
Flaw: His laziness prevents him from expressing his thoughts or taking action.
Remains consistent, a figure of complacent observation.
Lazy, observant, quiet, somewhat cynical or amused, complacent.
Locations
Farmhouse Roof
The sloped, tiled or thatched roof of a German farmhouse, bathed in bright sunlight.
Mood: Peaceful, idyllic, initially romantic
The peacock doves display affection, observed by other farm animals, setting the scene for the story's theme of perception and pride.
Farmyard
A large, open farmyard with a fence, likely dirt or gravel, where various poultry roam and interact.
Mood: Lively, bustling, full of animal interactions and social dynamics, with underlying currents of pride and judgment.
The main stage for the interactions and observations of the farm animals, where the turkey's adoration, the rooster's pride, and the ducks' disdain unfold.