Das Künstliche Auge

by Lisa Wenger · from Amoralische Fabeln

fairy tale satirical satirical Ages all ages 851 words 4 min read
Cover: Das Künstliche Auge

Adapted Version

CEFR A1 Age 5 397 words 2 min Canon 100/100

Once, a man had a special eye. It was not like other eyes. His name was Mr. Wobbly Eye. He had one special eye. This eye made him see things. He saw them in a funny way. It was different from other people.

Mr. Wobbly Eye thought people were silly. He laughed at them. They saw things normally. He did not see things that way. He thought his way was best.

One day, Mr. Wobbly Eye met The Artist. The Artist painted many pictures. He painted pretty pictures. Mr. Wobbly Eye thought The Artist was boring. He did not like his art.

Mr. Wobbly Eye's special eye woke up. He looked at the trees. "Look!" he said. "Trees are red!" The Artist saw green. Mr. Wobbly Eye laughed loudly. "You are wrong!" he said. The Artist felt very sad.

The Artist felt shy. He painted red trees. The picture had red trees. The People looked at the picture. They were confused at first. Then they said, "Wow!" They liked it. They bought the red tree picture.

Next, Mr. Wobbly Eye looked at the forest. "The forest is silver!" he said. The Artist painted a gray forest. The People saw the gray forest. They clapped for The Artist. They bought this picture too. The Artist got much money.

Then Mr. Wobbly Eye closed his eyes. "True beauty is not seen," he said. "It is heard!" He told Artist: Paint nothing. The Artist must paint nothing at all.

The Artist painted nothing. It was an empty white canvas. The People came to see it. They looked at the canvas. They said, "How deep!" They liked it. They loved the empty picture.

A Boy with Clear Eyes came in. He looked at the empty picture. He laughed a big laugh. "Ha ha!" he said. "It is just white!" The covers fell down. Everyone saw it was empty.

The People felt very silly. They got angry at The Artist. "You tricked us!" they shouted. They were very, very mad. They did not like him.

Mr. Wobbly Eye smiled a little. He walked away quickly. His special eye gave a wink. The Artist was very sad. Mr. Wobbly Eye was gone now.

The Artist learned a big lesson. It is good to see with your eyes. It is good to think with your mind. Do not say "yes" if you don't understand.

Original Story 851 words · 4 min read

Das künstliche Auge

Es war einmal einer, der ein künstliches Auge hatte. Das andere war ein gewöhnliches Auge, wie es jeder Mensch besitzt.

Niemand begriff, warum der Mann Dinge sah, die kein anderer sehen konnte, und warum er oft behauptete, es sei gar nichts da, wenn es alle anderen sahen.

Es kam daher, weil er einmal mit dem natürlichen Auge die Dinge betrachtete, und ein ander Mal mit dem künstlichen Auge. Öffnete er nur letzteres, so verzerrte sich ihm alles, was er sah, und wechselte Form und Farbe.

»Maulwürfe!« höhnte er die Leute, die kopfschüttelnd behaupteten, sie begriffen gar nicht, was er sehe. Oder er lachte sie aus.

»Sie bewundern wieder, was nicht da ist!« sagte er achselzuckend.

Der Mann ging über Land. Es war ein anderer bei ihm, ein Maler mit gewöhnlichen Augen. Der mit dem künstlichen Auge hatte eine mitleidige Verachtung für ihn, der Maler fühlte sie, und es war ihm unbehaglich.

»Ewig diese grünen Bäume,« murrte der Mann, dessen künstliches Auge noch schlief. »Es wird nachgerade langweilig! Grün! Solche altmodische Farbe!« Da erwachte sein Auge.

»Donnerwetter! Sie sind ja gar nicht grün! Da ist ja alles Farbe! Glut, Feuer! Fort mit den grünen Bäumen!«

Zögernd widersprach der Maler.

»Sie sind aber doch grün.«

»So, sind sie grün?« höhnte der andere, »weil ihr Blindschleichen sie grün seht, sind sie grün, nicht wahr?«

Dem Hohn gegenüber sind die Leute feig. Darum schämte sich der Maler und bekehrte sich rasch.

»Es ist wahr, sie sind rot!« sagte er zaghaft. Er sah sie zwar nicht eigentlich rot, aber es schien ihm doch, als ob sie einen rötlichen Schimmer hätten. Und bald kamen sie ihm rot vor, dunkelrot.

Darauf malte er ein Bild mit Bäumen, die wie in Blut getaucht aussahen, und den mächtigen Strom, der sein Bild quer durchschnitt, machte er ebenfalls rot. Auch das Gras, aber dieses mehr bläulich-rot!

Im Vordergrund krochen drei Schnecken, deren Fühlhörner sich berührten.

Der Maler wußte wohl, daß das Publikum sein himbeerfarbenes Bild nicht ohne weiteres annehmen würde. Er nannte es daher: Seelenharmonie. Das würde den Leuten zu denken geben.

Das Publikum stand vor des Malers Bild und lachte. Darauf schalt es. Dann versuchte es die Seelenharmonie zu begreifen. Zuletzt schämte es sich, daß es sie nicht begriff, und als es so weit war, hatte der Maler gewonnenes Spiel. Alle Welt bewunderte die »Seelenharmonie«, und das Museum der Stadt kaufte sie. Der Maler schrieb sich die Sache hinter die Ohren.

Wieder ging der Mann mit dem Maler spazieren. Sein natürliches Auge schlief, und nur das künstliche wachte. Er betrachtete den Wald.

»Hübsch, dieser Silberton,« sagte er daher. Diesmal versuchte es der Maler nicht einmal, seinen eigenen Augen zu glauben. Er sah den Wald sofort im Silberton, ging nach Hause und schuf ein Bild. Grau alles, einförmig, nebelhaft, verschwommen. Im Vordergrund ein schmutzig grüner Sumpf, auf dem eine gelbe Dahlie schwamm. »Toter Haß« hieß das Bild im Katalog.

Drei volle Tage brauchte das Publikum, bis es sich die rote Harmonie abgewöhnt hatte, dann aber hob es mit Begeisterung den »Toten Haß« auf den Schild. Und wieder nach drei Tagen sprach die Stadt von nichts anderem. Der Maler trug einen schweren Geldsack auf die Bank.

Zum dritten Mal gingen die zwei über Land. Der Mann schloß seine beiden Augen und spitzte dafür die Ohren.

»Hören muß man die Schönheit, nicht sehen!« rief er in Ekstase, »gar nichts soll auf der Leinwand sein, damit man voll genieße, empfinde, fühle!«

Der Maler malte ein Bild, und als er fertig war, sah die Leinwand aus, als wäre sie leer.

»Ah!« rief der Mann, »ausgezeichnet! Feuchtes Holz, Moos, faules Holz! Mord! Kühle Schauer zittern über meine Haut!« Er schloß die Augen.

Das Bild wurde zwischen zwei spitzen, schwarzen Bäumen aufgehängt, Klapperschlangen wandten sich um die Stämme. Graue Schleier fielen in geraden Falten über die Leinwand. »Mord« stand in langen verzerrten Buchstaben auf dem Rahmen. Er hatte die Form eines Galgens.

Das Publikum kam. Keiner wagte laut zu atmen oder gar sich zu schneuzen. Man empfand das Bild, fühlte es, nahm es auf.

»Ah!« seufzten alle. Ihre Seelen gingen auf den Fußspitzen. Ohne Gänsehaut ging keiner aus dem Saal.

Der Mann und der Maler saßen auf einer der Ruhebänke. Der Mann mit dem künstlichen Auge hielt sein natürliches Auge geschlossen, und der Maler alle beide.

»Wie schwer er an seinem Bilde trägt,« sagten die Leute und betrachteten sein blasses Gesicht.

Da kam ein Fremder zur Tür herein, mit blauen Augen und klarem Blick. Erstaunt betrachtete er den Maler, das Publikum und das Bild. Dann lachte er, laut und herzlich. Von dem Lachen zerrissen die Schleier vor dem Bild, und man sah plötzlich, daß die Leinwand leer war, leer und öde. Da fingen die Leute an sich zu räuspern, zu schneuzen, zu schwatzen und zu husten. Man konnte ordentlich hören, wie ihnen die Augen aufgingen.

Sie scharten sich um den Maler. »Hinaus!« schrie die Menge zornig.

Der Mann mit dem künstlichen Auge war schon fort. »Warte es ab,« sagte er zu ihm, »deine Zeit wird wieder kommen.« Da verkroch sich das Auge so, daß gar nichts mehr von ihm zu sehen war. –


Story DNA

Moral

People are often easily swayed by perceived authority and fear of appearing ignorant, leading them to accept falsehoods as truth.

Plot Summary

A man with an artificial eye sees the world differently and scoffs at others' normal perceptions. He manipulates a painter into creating increasingly abstract and nonsensical art, which, through the man's influence and the public's fear of appearing ignorant, becomes highly celebrated and profitable. Eventually, a stranger with clear vision exposes the deception, revealing an acclaimed 'empty' painting to be truly blank, causing the public to turn on the painter while the manipulative man disappears, hinting at future opportunities for such deception.

Themes

perception vs realityconformityart and deceptionthe power of suggestion

Emotional Arc

confusion to enlightenment (for the audience) | pride to shame (for the painter)

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: moderate

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs society | person vs self (for the painter)
Ending: moral justice
Magic: the artificial eye's ability to alter perception of reality
the artificial eye (distorted perception, subjective reality)the clear blue eyes of the stranger (objective truth, common sense)the empty canvas (deception, the emperor's new clothes)

Cultural Context

Origin: Swiss-German
Era: timeless fairy tale

Lisa Wenger was a Swiss writer and painter, and this story can be seen as a commentary on the art world of her time, particularly the rise of abstract art and the public's struggle to understand or accept it, often leading to pretension.

Plot Beats (11)

  1. A man has an artificial eye that makes him see things differently, often contradicting what others see.
  2. He scoffs at people who don't see what he sees, calling them 'moles'.
  3. He meets a painter with ordinary eyes and holds him in contempt.
  4. The man's artificial eye 'awakens' and he declares green trees are red, ridiculing the painter for seeing green.
  5. The painter, shamed, agrees the trees are red and paints a 'blood-red' landscape called 'Seelenharmonie', which the public initially laughs at but eventually admires and buys.
  6. The man's artificial eye sees a forest as silver, and the painter, without questioning, paints a gray, desolate scene called 'Toter Haß', which is also celebrated and earns him money.
  7. The man closes both eyes, insisting beauty is to be heard, not seen, inspiring the painter to create an empty canvas.
  8. The painter's empty canvas, titled 'Mord' and framed like a gallows, is hung with dramatic staging and is profoundly 'felt' and admired by the public.
  9. A stranger with clear eyes enters, laughs loudly, and the veils covering the 'Mord' painting tear, revealing the canvas is truly empty.
  10. The public, realizing their delusion, becomes angry and turns on the painter.
  11. The man with the artificial eye vanishes, telling the painter his time will come again, and his artificial eye retreats from view.

Characters

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The Man with the Artificial Eye

human adult male

Lean build, average height. His most distinguishing feature is the artificial eye, which he can 'activate' or 'deactivate' at will, causing his perception to shift dramatically. When his natural eye is 'sleeping' and the artificial one is active, his expression likely becomes more intense or distorted.

Attire: Not explicitly described, but given the setting of 'over the land' and interacting with a painter, he likely wears practical, perhaps slightly worn, European attire of the late 19th or early 20th century, such as a dark suit or a sturdy coat over trousers, suitable for walking.

Wants: To prove his unique perception is superior to others, to challenge conventional reality, and to exert influence over those he deems 'blind'.

Flaw: His reliance on his artificial eye makes him detached from shared reality; his arrogance blinds him to objective truth, and he is easily exposed by genuine, clear-sighted perception.

He begins as a figure of influence, successfully manipulating the painter and the public. His influence wanes dramatically when a clear-sighted stranger exposes the emptiness of the painter's work, which was based on his visions. He retreats, but not without a final, defiant promise of return.

His artificial eye, which seems to 'awaken' or 'sleep' and distorts his vision.

Contemptuous, arrogant, manipulative, eccentric, visionary (in his own distorted way). He delights in mocking others and imposing his unique, often bizarre, perceptions upon them.

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The Painter

human adult male

His physical description is not detailed, but he is noted to have 'ordinary eyes'. He is described as having a 'pale face' when carrying the burden of his empty canvas, suggesting a somewhat sensitive or anxious disposition.

Attire: As a painter in early 20th-century Europe, he would likely wear practical, somewhat artistic clothing, perhaps a smock or a simple jacket over a collared shirt, possibly with paint stains. His attire would be functional for his profession.

Wants: To achieve artistic success and public acclaim, even if it means compromising his own artistic integrity and vision.

Flaw: His timidity and lack of conviction in his own perceptions make him vulnerable to manipulation. He prioritizes public acceptance over artistic truth.

He starts as a conventional painter, then becomes a puppet of the Man with the Artificial Eye, creating increasingly abstract and empty works that gain him fame and fortune. His success is ultimately revealed as a sham, leading to public scorn and his downfall.

His pale, anxious face, often seen with a canvas that appears distorted or empty.

Impressionable, timid, easily swayed, opportunistic, lacking self-confidence in his own vision, eager for public approval.

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The Stranger

human adult male

Not explicitly detailed beyond his eyes and gaze, but his impact suggests a presence of clarity and honesty.

Attire: Not explicitly described, but as a 'stranger' entering a gallery, he would likely wear respectable, perhaps simple, European attire of the early 20th century, such as a dark suit or a neat jacket and trousers, without ostentation.

Wants: To react genuinely to what he sees, to expose falsehood through simple truth.

Flaw: None explicitly shown; his strength lies in his lack of weakness to manipulation.

He appears at the climax of the story, his simple, honest laughter shattering the illusion created by the Man with the Artificial Eye and the Painter, leading to the public's awakening.

His clear, blue eyes and hearty, uninhibited laughter.

Honest, perceptive, courageous, unpretentious, possesses a strong sense of objective reality.

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The Public

human adult unknown

A diverse group of people, not individually described, but collectively they represent the general populace.

Attire: Varied, typical of a European urban crowd attending an art exhibition in the early 20th century, ranging from more formal attire to simpler clothes, reflecting different social strata.

Wants: To appear cultured and intelligent, to conform to perceived artistic trends, to avoid social embarrassment.

Flaw: Fear of appearing ignorant, susceptibility to manipulation and peer pressure.

They are initially confused by the Man's and Painter's art, then shamed into admiring it, becoming enthusiastic followers. They are abruptly awakened to the truth by the Stranger's laughter and turn on the Painter in anger.

A crowd of people, initially looking confused, then feigning deep thought and admiration, finally expressing collective outrage.

Gullible, easily shamed, conformist, susceptible to trends, ultimately capable of collective anger and realization.

Locations

Rural Landscape (Forest Edge)

outdoor Implied temperate climate, possibly spring or summer given the 'green trees' initial description.

A German rural landscape, likely a forest edge or open woodland, with numerous trees. The ground is covered with grass and possibly some undergrowth. A powerful river or stream cuts across the scene.

Mood: Initially mundane, then shifting to a surreal, distorted, and later uniform/monochromatic perception due to the artificial eye's influence.

The man with the artificial eye and the painter walk here, leading to the painter's first two 'distorted' landscape paintings ('Seelenharmonie' and 'Toter Haß').

Numerous trees (initially green, then perceived as red, then silver/grey) A powerful river/stream Grass Three snails in the foreground (for the 'Seelenharmonie' painting)

Art Gallery/Exhibition Hall

indoor day Indoor climate controlled.

A public exhibition space within a city museum or gallery, designed to display paintings. It features walls for hanging art and benches for visitors to rest. The atmosphere is initially one of confusion and laughter, then forced admiration, and finally, shocked realization.

Mood: Initially mocking, then reverent and hushed, finally erupting into chaos and anger.

The painter's works are exhibited here, influencing public perception. The climax occurs when a stranger's laughter reveals the 'Mord' painting's emptiness, leading to public outrage.

Gallery walls (for hanging paintings) Ruhebänke (benches for resting) The 'Seelenharmonie' painting (raspberry-colored trees, red river, bluish-red grass, three snails) The 'Toter Haß' painting (grey, uniform, foggy, blurred, with a dirty green swamp and yellow dahlia) The 'Mord' painting (an empty canvas, framed like a gallows, with grey veils, two sharp black trees, and rattlesnakes around the trunks) A doorway where a stranger enters