Der Goldfasan

by Lisa Wenger · from Amoralische Fabeln

fairy tale cautionary tale melancholic Ages 8-14 916 words 4 min read
Cover: Der Goldfasan

Adapted Version

CEFR A1 Age 5 350 words 2 min Canon 90/100

Once, a new bird came. He was a Shiny Pheasant.

A Shiny Pheasant came in. His feathers were bright. He looked around proudly. He said, 'I am special!'

Rooster said, 'Hello!' Pheasant did not care. He thought, 'He is not special.'

The Shiny Pheasant walked around. He showed his bright feathers. The hens looked at him. They thought he was beautiful. He felt very happy.

The hens whispered. 'He is prettier.' White Hen walked by. The Shiny Pheasant looked at her. She felt very special.

The Shiny Pheasant talked to the White Hen. He said, 'You are pretty.' She liked words. He asked her to walk. She said, 'Yes, please!'

Other hens whispered about them. They said, 'Rooster not pretty.' Talked of feathers. He was not shiny.

The Old Rooster heard the hens. He felt sad. He said, 'I am your leader. If you want to go, you can.'

The White Hen came back. The Shiny Pheasant was with her. All the hens looked at him. He was very shiny.

The Old Rooster walked to them. He was angry. He said, 'She is my White Hen. We must have a contest!'

The two birds pushed and pecked. They made loud noises. Some small feathers fell. The White Hen looked away. She did not care. She ate a worm.

The Old Rooster was very tired. He was hurt. He could not lead the coop. He walked away slowly. The hens were very sad. They missed their kind Rooster.

Pheasant said, 'I am leader!' Hen looked. Her eyes were happy. She thought he was wonderful.

The next morning, the Shiny Pheasant was not there. He went to another yard. He found other shiny birds.

The White Hen flew to the fence. She looked for him. He did not look back. He played with a new friend.

The White Hen felt very sad. She felt lonely. She put her head down. She sat very still.

The other hens huddled close. They were sad. They missed their Old Rooster. They must find food now. They wished they were kinder. Pretty looks are not best.

Original Story 916 words · 4 min read

Der Goldfasan

Die Türe des Hühnerhofes knarrte. Man schob ein goldenes Etwas herein. Es flatterte herum, kreischte, beruhigte sich und sah sich um. Es war ein Goldfasan.

Er überblickte die Hühner und Enten, die ihn verwundert anstarrten, senkte hochmütig die Augenlider, hob den Schnabel und sagte: »Ich bin ein Goldfasan!« Dann sah er sich um, welchen Effekt seine Worte auf die Hühner gemacht hatten.

»Freut mich, Ihre Bekanntschaft zu machen!« sagte der Hahn im Namen aller. »Ein aufgeblasener Kerl,« dachte er dabei.

»Ein recht gewöhnlicher Patron,« urteilte der Fasan über den Hahn. Er ging langsam auf und ab, seine Schwanzfedern schleiften auf der Erde, und seinen goldenen Kragen schob er unaufhörlich nach vorn, erst nach links und dann nach rechts. Dann sah er sich wieder um, was die Hühner wohl dazu sagten. Er konnte zufrieden sein.

»Ein ausnehmend vornehmer Vogel,« sagte die Gelbe.

»Das ist etwas anderes als unser Hahn,« gluckste die Graugesprenkelte.

»Du, sieht man, daß mein Kamm erfroren ist? Ist er blau?« fragte ein großes, schwarzes Huhn mit riesigem Kamm.

»Nein,« sagte die Gelbe. Aber man sah es doch.

»Sieh, wie trübselig sich unser Hahn ausnimmt, den herrlichen, goldenen Federn des Fasans gegenüber. Der muß reich sein.«

»Und vornehm!« sagte die Graugesprenkelte.

Ein sehr schönes, weißes Huhn mit großem, rotem Kamm spazierte am Fasan vorbei. Es war des Hahns Lieblingshenne. Der Goldene machte seine schönsten Bücklinge und schob den Kragen unaufhörlich nach vorne, daß es gleißte und glänzte.

»Wie herrlich ist Ihr Gefieder, schöne Italienerin.«

»Bitte!« sagte sie und rauschte mit den Federn.

»Und welch herrliches Rot schmückt Ihren Kamm! Nie sah ich dergleichen!« rief feurig der Goldfasan.

»Bitte!« gluckste verschämt das Huhn.

»Gehören Sie dem Hahn hier?« fragte der Goldfasan.

»Ja, bis jetzt!« sagte das Huhn. Des Goldfasans Kragen schnellte nach vorn, er blies sich auf, er rasselte mit den Federn und schüttelte sich. Er funkelte förmlich.

»Wenn ich Sie zu einem Gang durch die Wiesen einladen dürfte?« fragte er.

»Ach bitte, ja!« gackerte schmelzend das Huhn. Sie gingen. Durch das hohe Gras glänzte es golden und schimmerte es weiß. Der ganze Hühnerhof sah den beiden nach.

»Es hört einfach alles auf,« sagte eine behäbige Henne mit zehn schwarzen Kücken, »einfach alles!«

»Und begreifst du, daß er unter allen gerade die Weiße ausgewählt hat? Das dumme Ding, fade wie Bohnenstroh?« fragte ein junges, schwarzes Hühnchen.

»Aber schneeweiß!«

»Schneeweiß! Dem Hahn gefällt schwarz besser!«

»Was willst du denn mehr? Oder hätte der Goldene dort auch schwarz schöner finden sollen?«

Der Hahn stand auf dem Mist und scharrte Körner heraus und Regenwürmer für seine Hühner. Er krähte laut und schmetternd, daß man es über zwei Wiesen hören konnte. Stolz überflogen seine Augen seine wohlgenährte und wohlgehütete Schar.

»Hahn! Du solltest auch so glänzende Federn haben,« sagte eines der Hühner und betrachtete geringschätzig die schöngebogenen, grünen Sicheln des Hahns.

»Und einen bronzenen Rücken!« kritisierte ein zweites.

»Und einen goldenen Kragen!« piepste das junge Hühnchen.

»Ich bin, wie ich bin,« sagte der Hahn. »Wer fort will, kann gehen.«

»Sei nur nicht gleich so grob,« schalt das graugesprenkelte Huhn, das vorhin dem Goldfasan zugehört hatte, als er mit dem weißen Huhn sprach, »wir wollen uns das nicht gefallen lassen.«

Das schneeweiße Huhn kam zurück mit seinem Begleiter. Die ganze Hühnergesellschaft umstand den glänzenden Vogel und bewunderte ihn.

Gravitätisch kam der Hahn geschritten.

»Fasan! Das weiße Huhn gehört zu mir. Du mußt mit mir darum kämpfen.« Der Fasan war kein Feigling. Er blähte sich und stellte sich in Positur.

Lange standen sie so, Auge in Auge, den Hals gestreckt, die Sporen bereit. Dann schossen sie aufeinander los und hackten sich mit den Schnäbeln. Und plötzlich standen sie wieder unbeweglich einander gegenüber.

Goldene und grüne Federn flogen herum, und goldene und grüne Federn lagen auf der Erde um die zwei Kämpfer.

Leise gackernd und glucksend standen die Hühner im Kreise herum. Die Schneeweiße tat, als gehe sie die Sache nichts an. Sie zerhackte einen Regenwurm und schielte dabei unter ihrem Kamm hervor nach Hahn und Fasan.

Plötzlich ertönte ein sonderbarer, krähender Schrei, der Hahn taumelte, kreischte, flatterte und lag auf der Erde. Blut lief über die Federn des Halses und färbte sie dunkelrot. Der Verwundete zuckte, schlug mit den Flügeln und wurde still. Dann schnappte er nach Luft und war tot.

Es erhob sich ein großes Gegacker, ein Wehklagen und Jammern und Piepsen.

»Wer sucht uns nun die Käfer? Und die guten, zarten Regenwürmer? Wer beschützt uns vor dem Habicht? Wer? Wer?«

»Ich bin nun euer Beschützer,« sagte der Goldfasan, und die Hühner gaben sich zufrieden.

Das Schneeweiße stand neben ihm und strich zärtlich eine Feder glatt an seinem goldenen Halskragen.

»Ich liebe dich ewig,« sagte der Goldfasan zu ihr. Das italienische Huhn schloß die Augen vor Glück.

Am nächsten Tag war der Goldfasan verschwunden.

Die Hühner saßen ganz verstört auf dem Mist und sahen hinüber in den Nachbarshof, wo unter Fasan und bronzenen Puten der Goldfasan herumspazierte, ohne auch nur einmal den Hals nach der verlassenen Schar zu drehen.

Die Schneeweiße flog auf den Zaun, sah sehnsüchtig hinüber und gluckste.

Der Fasan sah sie, senkte die Lider, hob den Schnabel und schob seinen Kragen vor. Dann ging er mit seiner goldenen Gefährtin weiter.

Lautlos saß das arme Weiße auf dem Zaun. Dann streckte es den Kopf unter die Flügel und rührte sich nicht mehr.

Dicht zusammengedrängt stand die verwaiste Hühnerschar. Dann sagte eine: »Wenn wir doch unsern Hahn wieder hätten!«

»Ja,« sagte die Graugesprenkelte, »nun können wir unsere Regenwürmer selber suchen!« Und eifrig begannen sie alle zu scharren.


Story DNA

Moral

Do not be swayed by superficial charm and outward appearances, for true worth lies in loyalty and reliable character.

Plot Summary

A vain Gold Pheasant arrives in a chicken coop, immediately charming the hens with his appearance and disparaging their humble rooster. He seduces the White Hen, the rooster's favorite, leading to a fatal duel where the rooster is killed. The Gold Pheasant then abandons the coop and the heartbroken White Hen for a more glamorous life, leaving the remaining hens to regret their loss and fend for themselves.

Themes

vanityloyaltydeceptionloss

Emotional Arc

contentment to disruption to tragedy to abandonment

Writing Style

Voice: third person omniscient
Pacing: moderate
Descriptive: moderate
Techniques: direct dialogue to reveal character, contrast between characters

Narrative Elements

Conflict: person vs person
Ending: tragic
Magic: talking animals
the Gold Pheasant's golden feathers (vanity, superficiality)the rooster's green sickles (humble strength, loyalty)the White Hen (naivety, susceptibility to flattery)

Cultural Context

Origin: Swiss (German-speaking)
Era: timeless fairy tale

The story reflects common themes in European fairy tales, often using animal fables to convey moral lessons about human behavior. 'Italienerin' (Italian hen) refers to a breed of chicken, often prized for its beauty.

Plot Beats (16)

  1. A Gold Pheasant is introduced to a chicken coop, immediately boasting about himself.
  2. The rooster greets him politely, but the pheasant dismisses him as common.
  3. The pheasant parades around, impressing the hens with his appearance and perceived nobility.
  4. The hens compare the pheasant favorably to their own rooster, making the rooster's favorite, the White Hen, feel special.
  5. The Gold Pheasant flirts intensely with the White Hen, who is flattered and agrees to a walk with him.
  6. The other hens gossip about the White Hen and the pheasant, while also criticizing their own rooster's appearance.
  7. The rooster, hearing the criticism, asserts his identity and warns that those who want to leave can.
  8. The White Hen returns with the Gold Pheasant, and the hens gather around to admire him.
  9. The rooster confronts the Gold Pheasant, challenging him to a fight for the White Hen.
  10. The two birds fight, shedding feathers, while the White Hen feigns disinterest.
  11. The rooster is mortally wounded and dies, leaving the hens distraught and lamenting their loss.
  12. The Gold Pheasant declares himself their new protector, and the White Hen expresses her affection for him.
  13. The next day, the Gold Pheasant is gone, having moved to a neighboring yard with other pheasants and turkeys.
  14. The White Hen flies to the fence, longing for him, but the Gold Pheasant ignores her and continues with his new companion.
  15. The White Hen, heartbroken, hides her head under her wing and remains motionless.
  16. The remaining hens, huddled together, regret the loss of their rooster and realize they must now fend for themselves.

Characters

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The Golden Pheasant

bird adult male

A strikingly beautiful, medium-sized bird with an upright, proud posture. His body is covered in vibrant, gleaming golden feathers, complemented by a long, flowing tail that drags elegantly on the ground. He has strong legs and sharp spurs, typical of a fighting bird.

Attire: His natural plumage serves as his 'wardrobe', consisting of brilliant golden feathers, a long, sweeping tail, and a distinctive golden ruff around his neck that he constantly adjusts.

Wants: To be admired and to secure the most desirable mate, reinforcing his own perceived superiority. He seeks attention and validation.

Flaw: His vanity and superficiality. He is easily swayed by new attractions and lacks true commitment or courage when faced with responsibility.

He arrives, disrupts the established order by charming the Rooster's favorite hen and killing the Rooster, briefly assumes leadership, and then abandons the flock for a more 'prestigious' group of pheasants and turkeys, showing his true fickle nature.

His shimmering, constantly adjusted golden neck ruff and long, trailing golden tail feathers.

Arrogant, vain, manipulative, charming (when it suits him), and ultimately cowardly. He is driven by a desire for admiration and a lack of loyalty.

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The Rooster

bird adult male

A well-fed and well-guarded rooster, implying a robust and healthy build. He is described as having 'beautifully curved, green sickles' (tail feathers) and a 'bronze back'. His comb is large and red.

Attire: His natural plumage, featuring green, sickle-shaped tail feathers and a bronze-colored back. His red comb is a prominent feature.

Wants: To protect and provide for his flock, maintaining order and safety within the coop. To defend his territory and his favorite hen.

Flaw: Perhaps a touch of overconfidence or a lack of flashy appeal compared to the Golden Pheasant, which makes him vulnerable to the hens' superficial judgments.

He starts as the respected leader, is challenged by the Golden Pheasant, fights bravely to defend his position and his hen, and ultimately dies in the conflict, becoming a martyr for his flock.

His beautifully curved, green sickle-shaped tail feathers and large, red comb.

Responsible, protective, proud, somewhat gruff but caring towards his flock, and courageous. He is a traditional leader.

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The White Hen

bird adult female

A very beautiful, pure white hen with a large, red comb. She is described as 'snow-white'.

Attire: Her natural plumage, consisting of pristine, snow-white feathers.

Wants: To be admired and to experience romance, even if it means betraying her current mate. Later, her motivation is to reunite with the Golden Pheasant.

Flaw: Her vanity and susceptibility to flattery, which leads her to abandon the Rooster and suffer heartbreak.

She begins as the Rooster's favored mate, is seduced by the Golden Pheasant, contributes to the Rooster's death, briefly enjoys the Golden Pheasant's attention, and is then abandoned, leading to her despair and implied death by heartbreak.

Her pristine, snow-white feathers and large, red comb.

Vain, easily flattered, somewhat fickle, and ultimately heartbroken. She is initially drawn to superficial charm but experiences deep sorrow when abandoned.

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The Grey-Speckled Hen

bird adult female

A hen with grey, speckled feathers.

Attire: Her natural plumage, consisting of grey, speckled feathers.

Wants: To observe and comment on the events in the coop. To find food for herself.

Flaw: Her tendency to be swayed by appearances and gossip.

She starts as an admirer of the Golden Pheasant and a critic of the Rooster, then expresses regret for the Rooster's loss and quickly adapts to the new reality by finding her own food.

Her distinctive grey, speckled feather pattern.

Gossip-prone, easily impressed by superficiality, and somewhat critical of the Rooster. Later, she shows a pragmatic side.

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The Yellow Hen

bird adult female

A hen with yellow feathers.

Attire: Her natural plumage, consisting of yellow feathers.

Wants: To observe and comment on the events in the coop.

Flaw: Her susceptibility to superficial charm and her tendency to judge based on appearance.

She remains largely static, serving as a voice of admiration for the Golden Pheasant and a commentator on the events.

Her bright yellow feathers.

Observant, easily impressed by perceived nobility, and somewhat naive. She is quick to praise the Golden Pheasant.

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The Large Black Hen

bird adult female

A large, black hen with a 'riesigem Kamm' (huge comb).

Attire: Her natural plumage, consisting of large, black feathers.

Wants: To ensure her appearance is acceptable and to fit in.

Flaw: Her insecurity about her physical flaws.

She remains largely static, serving as a minor character who highlights the hens' focus on appearance.

Her huge, possibly frostbitten, comb.

Self-conscious, concerned with her appearance, and somewhat insecure.

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The Young Black Chick

bird child female

A young, black chick.

Attire: Her natural plumage, consisting of soft, black down/feathers.

Wants: To understand the dynamics of the coop and express her opinions.

Flaw: Her youth and inexperience, leading to superficial judgments.

She remains largely static, serving as a voice of youthful opinion and admiration for the Golden Pheasant.

Her small size and black downy feathers.

Curious, critical, and somewhat naive. She is quick to point out perceived flaws in the Rooster and admire the Golden Pheasant.

Locations

Hühnerhof (Chicken Coop Yard)

outdoor Implied temperate climate, no specific weather mentioned beyond the rooster's comb being 'frozen' at some point, suggesting cold.

A bustling farmyard, likely part of a traditional German farm, with a wooden coop door, a prominent dung heap (Mist) where the rooster scratches for food, and open ground where chickens and ducks roam. The ground would be a mix of packed earth and scattered straw/feed.

Mood: Initially lively and communal, then becomes tense with the arrival of the Fasan, eventually turning desolate and industrious after the rooster's death and the Fasan's departure.

The Goldfasan's arrival, his initial interactions with the flock, the rooster's daily duties, and the final confrontation between the rooster and the Fasan.

Wooden coop door Dung heap (Mist) Scattered grains and worms Hens, ducks, rooster Packed earth ground

Wiesen (Meadows)

outdoor afternoon Mild, sunny weather, implying late spring or summer when grass is tall and green.

Expansive, tall grassy fields adjacent to the Hühnerhof, where the Goldfasan invites the white hen for a walk. The grass is tall enough to partially obscure the walking birds, creating a shimmering effect as they move through it.

Mood: Initially romantic and alluring, then becomes a symbol of betrayal and abandonment.

The Goldfasan seduces the white hen, taking her for a walk through these meadows, observed by the rest of the flock.

Tall green grass Open field Sunlight glinting on grass

Nachbarshof (Neighbor's Yard)

outdoor morning Clear, likely sunny day, similar to the previous day's implied conditions.

Another farmyard, visible from the original Hühnerhof, where the Goldfasan is seen strutting among other pheasants and bronze turkeys after abandoning the first flock. This yard implies a more diverse or perhaps grander collection of fowl.

Mood: Indifferent and prosperous from the Goldfasan's perspective, but heartbreaking and desolate from the abandoned flock's view.

The Goldfasan's ultimate abandonment of the first flock, revealing his true opportunistic nature, as he parades with a new 'golden companion' in a new setting.

Other pheasants Bronze turkeys Farmyard setting Fence separating the two yards