Die Richter
by Lisa Wenger · from Amoralische Fabeln
Adapted Version
Once there was a little mouse. She thought her white fur was special. Like her grandma's. White Mouse talked to Mole. She heard a story. "No," White Mouse said. "I do not believe it." She acted like she did not.
Mole talked. "I do not believe it myself," he said. "But they were seen. A girl mouse and a boy mouse. They were close. Many saw them." White Mouse listened.
White Mouse wanted to know more. She acted like she did not care. But she really did. She thought of Grandma Mouse. Grandma Mouse was very special. White Mouse talked like her. She knew what was right.
Mole smoothed his fur. "They were close," he said. "They shared a little candle. They nibbled it. Yes, they did this. They were friends."
White Mouse shook her head. "This is not good," she said. "It is wrong. They must not be close. This is a bad thing." She felt very big. She knew what was right.
Mole nodded. "The story is true," he said. "Someone must talk to Brown Mouse. She must know this is wrong. It is right." Mole felt big.
White Mouse agreed. "Yes," she said. She felt very good. Her fur looked whiter. It was shinier now. She felt very proud.
White Mouse felt strong. She would talk to Brown Mouse. She would tell her about the story. She walked away quickly.
White Mouse found Brown Mouse. "All know," she said. "You were with the boy mouse. This is not good. We know this. You did wrong."
White Mouse spoke. "You must not be friends," she said. "You must not be happy like this. We do not want this. It is not allowed."
Brown Mouse felt very, very sad. She was confused. "What?" she asked. "What are you saying? This is not true. I did nothing wrong."
White Mouse looked at her fur. It was very white. Whiter than Grandma Mouse's fur. She felt very happy. She was proud of herself. She had done well.
Brown Mouse was so sad. Her heart hurt very much. She walked away slowly. She cried softly. She felt very alone. No one knew her.
White Mouse went to Mole. "I did the right thing!" she said. Mole nodded his head. Brown Mouse was still sad. She was all alone. She felt very bad.
Do not talk about others. If it is not true. It can make people very sad.
Original Story
Die Richter
»Nein,« sagte die Maus, deren Großmutter eine weiße Maus gewesen, »das glaube ich nicht. So schlecht ist niemand.«
»Ich will ja auch nichts gesagt haben. Ich glaube es selber nicht. Bestimmt kann es ja niemand behaupten ...« sagte der Maulwurf. »Aber wissen Sie ...« Die Maus, deren Großmutter eine weiße Maus gewesen, und die darum meinte, sie sei auch eine weiße Maus, zitterte mit den Schnurrbarthaaren, so begierig war sie zu erfahren, was denn eigentlich vorgefallen sei ...
»Ja wissen Sie.« Der Maulwurf strich sich über das behagliche Bäuchlein und glättete seinen schwarzen Pelz, »man hat mir gesagt ... man hat sie zusammen gesehen ...«
Aha. Eine Sie und ein Er. Die Maus mit der weißen Großmutter ringelte das Schwänzchen. Es stand ganz steif in die Höhe. Vorne strich sie sich sanft und bescheiden über das Schnäuzlein und schloß halb die glänzend schwarzen Augen. »Ich bin eigentlich keine Freundin von derartigem. Sie wissen, meine Großmutter ...« Der Maulwurf verbeugte sich.
»Ja, natürlich, ich weiß. Ich würde es auch gar nicht wagen, so etwas weiter zu sagen, aber ... man hat sie zusammen gesehen. Es läßt sich nicht leugnen. Sie waren in der Speisekammer.« Des Maulwurfs blinde Äuglein blinzelten.
»Pfui,« sagte die Maus im Tone der weißen Großmutter. »Man sah sie im Keller ...«
»Oh,« zirpte die Maus. Das Schwänzlein fiel erschöpft herunter. »Sie haben zusammen an einer Kerze geknabbert.«
»Ah,« piepste die Enkelin der Seligen. »Und das alles, trotzdem ...«
»Was, trotzdem?«
»Trotzdem er für eine Mausin und ... neun Kinderchen, nackt und bloß, ja, nackt und bloß, zu sorgen hat.«
»Es ist nicht möglich,« ächzte die Maus.
»Möglich und wahr.« Bestimmt sagte es der Maulwurf, und faltete seine rosigen Patschchen über dem Leib. »Man muß mit ihr reden. So etwas wollen wir nicht dulden. Ich will mich nicht heilig sprechen, aber so etwas ... so etwas ...« Er schwieg.
»Sie haben recht,« sagte die Maus, und es schien ihr plötzlich, als ob ihr Pelz heller würde und einen gewissen Glanz bekäme. »Man muß mit ihr reden.«
»Ausgezeichnet,« nickte der Maulwurf beifällig, »das muß man. Sie sollen wenigstens wissen, die Sünder, daß man weiß ...«
»Natürlich. Das wäre noch schöner, wenn sich zwei einfach lieben könnten, ohne daß ... wie soll ich sagen ... einfach so ... ohne weiteres ...« Der Maulwurf schwieg. Er war kein Redner.
Die Maus, deren ehrwürdige Großmutter noch weißer gewesen als je, entschloß sich rasch.
»Ich rede mit ihr,« quietschte sie. Und sie ging stracks und redete mit der Angeschuldigten.
»Es ist uns allen bekannt,« begann sie, »bekannt, daß ...«
»Bekannt, daß?« fragte die hübsche, braune Feldmaus. »Was?«
»Es fällt mir schwer zu sagen ... daß wir wissen ... daß Sie mit – Sie wissen, wen ich meine – zusammen in der Speisekammer gewesen sind, und im Keller gewesen sind, und zusammen an einer Kerze genascht haben ... Ich habe den Auftrag, Ihnen zu sagen, daß wir dieses sträfliche Verhältnis nicht dulden wollen. Nein, wir wollen nicht, daß zwei unerlaubterweise und so ohne weiters glücklich zusammen seien, und wir meinen ...«
»Was? Was wollen Sie eigentlich sagen? Was für ein Verhältnis? Der – und ich?« Die Maus, die die schwere Aufgabe übernommen, der hübschen Feldmaus mitzuteilen, daß sie sich nicht ungestraft einem sträflichen Glück hingeben könne, saß auf ihren Hinterpfötchen, ringelte zierlich das graue Schwänzchen, drehte den Schnurrbart und besah sich zufrieden. Sie war weiß geworden, so weiß, wie ihre selige Großmutter nie gewesen. Wahrhaftig.
Die braune Feldmaus aber hatte der Schlag getroffen vor Entrüstung über die ungerechte Anklage.
»Ein Gottesgericht,« sagte nachher die weiße Maus zum Maulwurf. Sie gingen und riefen den Totengräber, daß er seines Amtes walte.
Story DNA
Moral
Unfounded gossip and self-righteous judgment can destroy innocent lives.
Plot Summary
A self-righteous mouse, obsessed with her 'white' lineage, and a mole spread a baseless rumor about a pretty brown field mouse having an illicit affair. The white mouse, feeling morally superior and physically 'whiter' with each judgment, confronts the innocent brown mouse, accusing her of a 'criminal relationship' and forbidding her happiness. Overwhelmed by the unjust accusation, the brown field mouse dies of shock. The white mouse, unrepentant, declares it 'God's judgment' and calls the gravedigger.
Themes
Emotional Arc
calm to outrage to tragic
Writing Style
Narrative Elements
Cultural Context
Lisa Wenger was a Swiss writer and artist. This story reflects common societal anxieties about reputation, gossip, and moral policing, often prevalent in conservative communities.
Plot Beats (14)
- A mouse, proud of her 'white' grandmother, discusses a rumor with a mole, initially feigning disbelief.
- The mole, after some prodding, reveals that 'they' (a 'she' and an 'he') were seen together.
- The mouse, despite her initial pretense of disinterest, is eager for details and adopts a self-righteous tone, referencing her grandmother.
- The mole elaborates, stating the pair were seen in the pantry and cellar, nibbling a candle.
- The mouse expresses disgust, then learns the male mouse has a wife and nine children, intensifying her condemnation.
- The mole asserts the rumor is true and that 'they' must be confronted, feeling morally superior.
- The mouse agrees, feeling her fur grow brighter and more lustrous with her self-perceived righteousness.
- The mouse, feeling empowered, decides to confront the accused female mouse.
- The mouse confronts the pretty brown field mouse, stating that 'everyone knows' about her 'criminal relationship' with the male mouse.
- The white mouse explicitly forbids the brown mouse from being 'unduly happy' and enjoying an 'unpermitted' relationship.
- The brown field mouse is utterly shocked and indignant by the false accusation.
- The white mouse observes her own fur has become even whiter, surpassing her grandmother's legendary whiteness, feeling satisfied.
- The brown field mouse dies from the shock and injustice of the accusation.
- The white mouse tells the mole it was 'God's judgment' and they call the gravedigger.
Characters
The Mouse (Granddaughter)
A small, delicate mouse, initially described as having a greyish coat, but believes herself to be white like her grandmother. Her fur seems to lighten and gain a certain sheen as she embraces her role as a judge.
Attire: Natural mouse fur, initially grey, but she perceives it as becoming whiter and more lustrous.
Wants: To uphold perceived moral standards, to feel important and righteous, and to emulate her idealized white grandmother.
Flaw: Hypocrisy, self-righteousness, and a desire for social validation. She is easily manipulated by gossip and her own inflated sense of virtue.
Transforms from a curious gossip into a self-appointed, harsh moral judge, convinced of her own purity and righteousness, ultimately leading to the tragic demise of the accused.
Initially timid and easily swayed, she quickly becomes self-righteous, judgmental, and hypocritical. She is eager for gossip and enjoys feeling morally superior.
The Mole
A plump mole with a comfortable belly and smooth, black fur. He is described as having blind eyes, characteristic of moles.
Attire: Natural, smooth black fur.
Wants: To engage in gossip and feel superior by condemning others, without taking direct responsibility for the accusations.
Flaw: Cowardice, hypocrisy, and a love for gossip. He instigates judgment but avoids direct confrontation.
Remains consistent in his role as a purveyor of gossip and judgment, encouraging the Mouse's self-righteousness.
A gossipy, self-important, and hypocritical character. He enjoys spreading rumors while feigning reluctance, and is quick to judge others while claiming not to be holy himself.
The Pretty Brown Field Mouse
A pretty, brown field mouse. Her appearance suggests health and vitality, contrasting with the judgmental mice.
Attire: Natural brown fur.
Wants: To live her life happily and innocently, unaware of the judgment brewing around her.
Flaw: Vulnerability to false accusations and the cruelty of others' judgment. Her innocence makes her unprepared for such malice.
She is unjustly accused and, overwhelmed by indignation, is metaphorically 'struck down' by the accusations, leading to her death.
Innocent, bewildered, and ultimately heartbroken by the false accusations. She is direct in her questions, showing her confusion and lack of understanding of the malicious gossip.
The White Mouse (Grandmother)
A legendary white mouse, even whiter than her granddaughter perceives herself to be. Her whiteness symbolizes purity and high moral standing in the granddaughter's mind.
Attire: Natural, pure white fur.
Wants: To serve as a moral compass and ideal for her granddaughter.
Flaw: Not applicable, as she is a symbolic figure.
Not applicable, as she is a symbolic figure rather than an active character.
Perceived as a paragon of virtue and moral rectitude by her granddaughter, though her actual personality is not shown.
Locations
The Mouse's Burrow
A cozy, confined underground space, likely with soft earth walls and a sense of being hidden away. The atmosphere is initially gossipy and self-righteous, becoming increasingly judgmental.
Mood: Confined, gossipy, self-righteous, judgmental, eventually triumphant for the white mouse.
The initial conversation between the white mouse and the mole where the accusations are spread and the plan to confront the accused is formed.
The Pantry
A human-made storage area, likely cool and dark, filled with various food items. It's a place of temptation and illicit snacking for the mice.
Mood: Forbidden, tempting, secretive, slightly dangerous.
The alleged location where the brown field mouse and her companion were 'seen together,' sharing food.
The Cellar
A damp, cool, and dark underground storage area, likely with stone or packed earth walls. It's another place of alleged secret rendezvous.
Mood: Eerie, secretive, illicit, cold.
Another alleged location where the brown field mouse and her companion were 'seen together,' specifically nibbling on a candle.
The Brown Field Mouse's Dwelling
Likely a simple, humble burrow or nest, contrasting with the self-important white mouse's perception of herself. It's where the confrontation takes place.
Mood: Initially calm and innocent, then shocked and indignant, ultimately tragic.
The location where the white mouse confronts the pretty brown field mouse with the accusations, leading to the field mouse's demise.